I LOVE IT KEEP IT GOIN!

a realy enjoyable story. i love the way you write and want to hear more about ron and hermione please. keep it up.

it was brilliant but poor ron. ah. keep writing plz

firstly, i rather liked this chapter

secondly, i am hurt that you find my thoughts random

thirdly, see if i review any more of your chapters!

fourthly (with a u), you need to update soon



-the king of cheese

...such a tease :)

I enjoyed this chapter very much, although I think a little clearer explanation of exactly why she was angry at Harry would have better better- although yours was fine :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Awesome story! I personally loved the Ron dream the best, with Harry holding his hand. lol But great story, please update, I love it. :D

I really liked this chapter a lot, and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE keep writing. (Am I motivating you enough?) Well, I hope you decide to update soon. (Just don't die of not getting enough sleep.) I really liked the ending to this chapter because it was totally unpredictable. Oh, and just to remind you, I loved it and PLEASE update. I can't wait for the next chapter!

oh, lord of the crackers
you did borrow it
stole just sounds so. . . . negative
just like you borrowed that bit about bellatrix from my brain
you're welcome =]]
it is repayment for the rapid heartbeat thing
i rather liked this chapter a lot
and if other people can't stand a chapter of harry/ginny in a ron/hermione fic. . . . . then all i have to say to them is this:
you need to see a psychologist

that is all

I don't really like the ending to the chapter, but it was still good. Keep it up!

Oh, my dear Lord of the Crackers! I rather liked this chapter. I love how moody Ron is all the time. And how he get's mad at everyone when he's upset. Haha, I don't think Harry and Ginny being all couply around him will improve his mood, but it might make for an interesting chapter. Just a suggestion. Lalalalala.





The King of Cheese

Lord of the Crackers. I must say, I am impressed by your alternate ending. Partly because I came up with a bit of it. Haha. I love all the random stuff we come up with. This chapter was quite intense, and I am quite glad that you've learned to spell Viktor correctly. Though some of your work could use the spell and grammar check... I jest. Update soon, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And you'd better not finish it in chapter 5, or you will have me to answer to! Mwahahaha.
-King of Cheese

i like your story and i hope you write more. :)

Can't wait to see what happens Update SOON!! XD

well done...update NOW!

haha i wouldn't mind having mashed potatoes for breakfast...as long as they taste good XD

stay cool,
Charlie Bucket