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Bunnyhops
2009-12-03 . chapter 1
BRILLIANT!
ExperimentalMe
2009-08-16 . chapter 15
A great story with yummy lemons! How delightful.
Bravo!
Zookee
2009-04-25 . chapter 15
Wonderfully original. I loved reading this story, and the humor was amazing.
Pathatlon
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Just read the entire story but forgot to give feedback.

I don't mind the sex. At all. But I also thought the battle between the students and the teachers were really fun. For several chapters I was laughing my arse off and suddenly Hermionew was having sex with Lucius and Snape. I. DON'T. MIND! I loved it...

But... it's still an intrieging idea to continue the fight without so much sex. She can end up with Snape and all, or Lucius, it's just the fight and the planning really had me laughing. You should make an continuation of that. A sort of second outcome to the story, just to see how it was like..

Anyway, I'm off to read your other works. :P
knitchick
2009-02-26 . chapter 15
Very interesting and creative story...lucky Hermione!
Cyranothe2nd
2009-01-15 . chapter 15
ROFL, who knew the whole thing was just an excuse for a four chapter menage-a-troi? *love*
Cyranothe2nd
2009-01-15 . chapter 7
LOL-Hermione has an STD! From Voldemort! HAHA! Lucius' about turn was hilarious!
Cyranothe2nd
2009-01-15 . chapter 6
I Renounce Hermione Granger and all Her Works--LOL!
Cyranothe2nd
2009-01-15 . chapter 5
This chapter was hilarious! The "Snape training", the debate on which format to use in potions, the rhymes to help remember potions...all very funny. But it was the last bit-where Snape dismisses the students but they all ignore him because he called them names--that had me rofl
Cyranothe2nd
2009-01-15 . chapter 4
First time reader/reviwer. Clever!Lucius is clever. And I love that Hermione and co. are trying to run off the teachers. This is going to be *great*!
zafaran
2008-10-17 . chapter 7
{hysterical giggles} Oh, dear Lord. What Hermione just did to Lucius Malfoy is absolutely, utterly hysterically funny. Brilliant. The lead off symptoms of spots and impaired fashion sense were so *well* targeted. I can't wait to find out what happens in the upcoming chapters. At least with Severus they're being challenged in their learning even as the war continues. Don't blame them for being very P. O.'d with what the Ministry has done to them though. Their prison is a shade nicer than Azkaban, but that's all that it's got going for it since the Ministry is using the "school" as a form of punishment if I read the motivations correctly. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Nessa Blade
2008-09-03 . chapter 15
Oh this story is deviously deviant! Sorry, after I read that in Malfoy's thoughts its something that got stuck in my head. I enjoyed the small emotional roller coaster that this story put me through. Yes, I know that its supposed to be a comedy but in a few sections I noticed that one could get into it a bit more deeper. The fact that you didn't still makes it a good story to read, so either way it doesn't matter. Oh and I'm sure you might have already what I'm about to say but thank you for giving us Snape in heels and making it sort of believable or at least to the point that one wouldn't roll their eyes at the scenario. Take care!

-Nessa.
jean jelly bean
2008-07-10 . chapter 15
This was a wonderful and brilliant story. Today's fanfics seem to be going downhill and it is very refreshing to read a story with a quality plot line, humor, smut, good spelling and grammar, and with an ending that didn't cop out. Bravo. I look forward to reading more of your works.
Keaira Lupin
2008-06-28 . chapter 15
It's 2am, I scared the dogs into a barking frenzy and woke my 2 year old I was laughing so hard. I love this! Fantastic writing!
jasmine-leigh
2008-06-17 . chapter 15
hilarious all the way through with a gr8 ending, loved the way at the begining theu ** off all the teachers
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