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| Captain Deadpool 2007-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseVery poetic fic, a little sloppy here and there, but I think mine are worse, so whatever. |
| karma5 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abusethis was a really great story. thanks for writing it! |
| Kirmon64 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI've been sitting here after reading this for about five minutes, trying to think of what to say, and I've come to the realization that you've rendered me speechless with the awesomeness of your writing. In other words, I really, really like this :) |
| Kari 2007-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww,that was so Sweet Ironhide So clueless even if he is brillant. |
| Gladrial10 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseSQUEE! OMG! How could you possibly write something so dead on from simply watching the movie?! I thought with such a limited basis, I would be walking into something rather amateurish. WOW! Favorite lines: "Even her annoying habits, such as coating him repeatedly in copious amounts of saliva or chewing on him to relieve the pain of teething, are no more than that: annoyances." "She goes as far as to bring him ridiculous flowers to decorate his dashboard. Sometimes she cries and cries until his sensors alert him of a possible dehydration." "Ironhide is too overwhelmed by the seemingly endless list of human’s antics to give every of her whims a second thought, and just answers honestly that yes, the numerous pieces of big, chunky metal jewellery that she wears makes her quite beautiful for a human in his optics, and let her kiss his mouth plate as much as she wants." It's all so cute! Especially her dressing as an autobot and him chasing off the boys. And such a sad ending. *sniff* It all touched me so. Way to go, girl! You definately impressed me. |
| Sothe 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusewhat a depressing ending to a good stroy |
| the ness-ness 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseO_O That was cool...I never thought that Ironhide would be that dense, but you made it work well. Good job! ~the ness-ness~ |
| Gabriel The Fallen 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, but very sad. I'ma gonna go cry now... Good story, could have used more description, but is also very good as it is. |
| Zexion666 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuse*sniffles* that was great. I had tears at the part about "It'll be like having children!". I |
| Jason M. Lee 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseBittersweet ending. But in a way, this ironic ending works out quite well. |
| Mrs. Optimus Prime 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI loved this fic. It showed a soft side to Ironhide. Please write more to the series! |