I could see this as an episode, good story line. Just watch out for those homonyms (peer,pier).

Cally :D Awesome as ever!

Your Dean cracks me up...with his comments, ways with the ladies & his oh...Dean-ness!

Am so enjoying the hunt aspect of the story too. Mysterious green latern light...multiple victims...

Best of all I'm loving the whole Sam & Dean thing on how they are handling Dean's limited lifespan.

As always I await the next chap eagerly.

Yay you!

- Suze :D :)

Needless to say I'm totally hook on this story! I'm intrigue by the whole green light thing very spooky. Btw i totally loved this line “We’re hunters, Sam,” “No Dean, we’re a family first. You taught me that.” So touching i loved it! -Laz

Anyone who uses Styx's Panozzo brothers as the Winchester alias is alright in my book! That cracked me up!

Interesting story you've started here with the light. The light seems to have a pattern of killing someone, but making sure that someone else sees it - then only to kill them. Does that mean Tayla's dad is next? He seems like such a nice little fisherman...

Thanks for sharing!

:D
Caroline

Oops, realized I hadn't left a review for this chapter...

What struck me the most is how well you've captured the brothers' voices. They fight, argue, do some questionable things (running over Sam's laptop? Oh, Dean..)and in the end, love each other horribly.

Very nice intro chapter!

This is such a great story! The supernatural mystery is very nicely done; it feels like an episode of the show. And the tension between the brothers is so palpable. The stress of the deal is definitely getting to Sam while Dean tries to cope in the way he knows best-lots of girls and keeping quiet about his fears. Oh boys...

Hey Cally.
It's definitely getting more interesting. Great work, I look forward to reading the next bit.
But didn't you say in the first chapter that they found Sampson's body? If not ignore me, lol.
Loving it. :)
Lyca x

“You know, save the planet and all. Go Earth!”

Oh man!! I laughed so much at that one!! I love it!!

**stares at screen in hope the next chapter is gonna appear**

Oh Cal, loved it so...and yes it was well worth the long wait!

This is the first ff I've read that is set after season 2, so the brothers struggle & different reactions to Dean's impending doom was so interesting & great.

Plus you nailed Sam & Dean's dialogue & Winchesterness!

I'm intrigued already re the hunt & what's gonna happen next & where you'll take it.

Geez Dean is such a man **! Gotta luv him though :)

Loved it, loved it, loved it!

More sooner rather than later...pretty please.

- Suze

Wow Cally. That was intense. For Dean to trash Sam's pride and joy, I was gob smacked. lol. Really good, I enjoyed that, can't wait to read more. :)

Told u I wasn't going to catch any z's until I read it ;) There's a lot of emotions and I loved the way u handle them, some lines were priceless and some a lil painful (but in a good way) I was literally lol when i read “And you may want to water that fern...you know, save the planet and all. Go Earth!” I can totally picture Dean saying that. It was a great chapter!