   ILDV 2008-07-03 . chapter 13Good. |
| ILDV 2008-04-14 . chapter 12 Good. |
 dark bethilor 2008-04-08 . chapter 11 i want to see palpatine lose |
| ILDV 2008-02-12 . chapter 11 Good. |
 Skywindow 2008-01-05 . chapter 10cool story. Love the funny author notes too:) update soon, please. |
| ILDV 2008-01-03 . chapter 10 Good. |
| syncopation 2007-11-27 . chapter 2 It's spelt Obi-Wan. |
| ILDV 2007-11-27 . chapter 9 Good. |
 IluvAUs 2007-11-09 . chapter 8OMG! Coruscant's gonna be invaded! WTF are we gonna do now? PLEASE update ASAP! |
| ILDV 2007-11-09 . chapter 8 Good. |
| ILDV 2007-10-29 . chapter 7 Good. |
| ILDV 2007-10-22 . chapter 6 Good. |
| Rya Likao 2007-09-02 . chapter 4 Nice beggining. I like Anakin, Obi-Wan and the choice of your vision.
KEEP WHRITING! |
| IluvAUs 2007-08-02 . chapter 2 Oh Anakin is gonna be SO ticked at Count Dooku. (Or should I say Count Doodoo? XD) |
| IluvAUs 2007-08-02 . chapter 1 This is good! I always like the opening scroll part. |
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