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| kuhekabir 2008-03-30 ch 12,  | abuseI liked it. Thanks for sharing :) |
| JaredsGirl23 2008-03-04 ch 12, | abuseThat was really good , cant wait to read more by you :) |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abuseSpitting blood? Now that doesn't bode well... but I won't complain about more Sam-torture ahead ;o) |
| tanpopo no hana 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI know this should probably make me concerned, but... he's choking on M-Ms! *lol* Poor Sammy has the worst of luck... |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 12, | abuseOkay, I loved the sponge bath comment and Dean's react was vintage Dean! lol Oh, and when Sam went into the bathroom, I just KNEW he was gonna take out the IV... but then he actually did it and I was on Dean's side, like "Come on! You nearly died!" hehehe Way to go Bobby for managing to get peace between the brothers at last, and the comment about "Dude, I gotta slug that doctor before we go!" I was hoping he actually would! lol Great story! I didnt even realise I'd finished the chapter, let alone the story, until I suddenly saw the word "End". Sad :( *sniff* BUT there's a new fic up, I hear from a very reliable source, so I'm gonna check it out :) |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 10, | abuseAw, poor Dean! Like he didn't feel bad enough already! I wanted to body slam that doctor! MEAN! And Sammy, even feeling as awful as he does, he stands up for Dean and tries to convince him that it wasn't his fault... ...but poor Dean has already taken on the doctors words and added it to his own guilt! *sigh* Geez, way to make me wanna take 'em home and bake them cookies! lol |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 9, | abuseI knew it! Sam got worse, deaths door and NOW they go to the hospital! i nearly forgot to breathe... just like poor Sammy! Gotta go! Gotta Read! Gotta... argh! |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 8, | abuseGotta love that Bobby: "You boys wanna play Florence Nightingale in the other room?" That was a GREAT line! Ooh, is Dean gonna get Sam to the doctor? Somehow I have a weird feeling he might not, and Sam's gonna get worse before he finally does... Hm... |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 7, | abuseYou know, you said something about complications in choking? Well, that'll happen if you stab yourself with a tree branch and knock yourself out on a rock... poor Sam dont get a break! lol Okay, onto the next chapter! I'm excited, coz I forgot how many chpater there were so I jsut checked andthere's 12! Yay! PS The spelling mistakes is coz I'm too excited to stop and fix them! lol |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 5, | abuseOh, cant wait to see what Sam's gonna do now! This could REALLY hurt! :) I would've expected Dean to insist on carrying the axe, but then again I guess Sam's done too good a job of hiding how he really feels - again! I can see this isn't going to end well... |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 4, | abuseMan, I love this chapter! Why does Sam always insist on hiding how bad he's feeling? And was that Dean trying to hide how much he'd been effected by Sam choking and not breathing when he was teasing him to Bobby? AND I loved the phrase "Cough up a lung"... very Aussie, I gotta say it made be smile and I felt very much at home! Onto more! |
| JenBurch 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abusehehehe no blue ones? bummer huh? Not a fan, myself. I was thinking how ironic it was - and woulda made a good for Dean to make after the fact - that they fight demons on a daily basis and Sam's nearly taken out by a peanut m'm! lol Great chapter... but why do I get the feeling that, once again, there's more going on with Sam than you're telling us? Is he bleeding to death again? lol |
| astalder27 2008-01-14 ch 12, | abuseI love it!! My favorite stories are the ones where Dean really lets his emotions show... and when Sam gets the crap kicked out him LOL! Terrific job, probably my favorite story of yours!! |
| PipkinTwo 2007-12-07 ch 12, | abuseYou've done it again Kokoda, a really good read, and an original critter too! Great job |
| Zadrak 2007-11-25 ch 2, | abuseim enjoying this story far too much! Will read more in the morning - its 2.15 am and im wilting lol. M&Ms are scary... xZx |