lol, cute story! I've always loved Gus!

I have read this before and I must say it's definitely improved. I love it. Spooktacular work ^^

That was hilarious! Great setup, and then the serial blow-darting, too much fun (if 'fun' is an appropriate word to describe it, but *I* think it's fun...). George's exchange with Leota was my favorite scene. "She had a voice like honey… that had been frozen and hacked at with an ice pick." A definite improvement on a well-worn simile. "It was… anti-climatic to say the least." Exactly what I had been thinking, but in a good way, of course.

"Okay, new plan. We had been chatting, and Dustin had been so boring, that he and Lily had fallen asleep."

That part always makes me laugh. Brilliant as before and I I spotted all the improvements. Excellent job. I'm always glad this is being it's own story now. Putting this on my favorites.

I don't think I can say much more, other than I love this story! I loved it when I first read it at the end of Ghosts 1,0 and I'm so glad that you finally posted this as a separate oneshot on its own. It definitely deserved to be its own story. I like that you also went back and added a few more descriptions then last time.

I still crack up everytime I read George shooting Lily, Dustin, and the hitchhikers with the darts. :p

Just overall, I love this story and think it's one of your funniest.