 Taraah36 2009-11-06 . chapter 15STANDING OVATION..an absolutely wonderful story..and well depicted..i could see every moment of it in my mind as i read ..this goes down in my favorites..i just want to know what thing..do they get married and when...?? |
 TEE 2009-09-16 . chapter 15 TELL ME WHY THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!OMG!I CRIED MY EYES OUT LAUGH MY ASS OFF AND FELT MY HEART BREAK AND THEN JUST WANTED TO KISS U FOR THAT ENDING I LOVED THIS STORY THANK U SO MUCH U REALLY ARE A KICK ASS WRITTER OMG I LOVED IT! |
 I.am.the.Wind.Mizuki.Cullen 2009-09-15 . chapter 15LOVED IT! I liked reading it
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 Yue Hua 2009-06-30 . chapter 1Uwah~ I've been reading the first chapter, and I have to say I'm already hooked onto the storyline! It's an amazing story, and I love the way you've written it~
There are a few slight things that bother me in chapter one, notably the high school system, which is three years in Japan as opposed to the four years in western countries...but that's likely because I'm familiar with Japanese culture and get picky about such things.
There were very few grammatical errors, and made the reading smooth! This is a great story, and I'll definitely be finishing it up [and hopefully updating my opinions with another review]. |
 PurpleHiraikotsuRider 2009-06-30 . chapter 15you, my friend, are a genius. |
 remix 2009-06-04 . chapter 15 so far so good. I approve of you making a sequal. and buy me approving of this. I'm telling you this have one ready for me next month to review. see you then! |
 remix 2009-06-04 . chapter 14 this was a very romantic and somtimes funny story. you should review some of the chapter because some of them you left words out or miss used them so you should trie to have those fixed. other wise that was a very good story and i am looking forward to the next one. |
 remix 2009-06-02 . chapter 1 this was and awesome story! it's a story that makes me just keep wanting more. I hope the next chapter turns out as good as this one. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY! |
 Gaara'sGirl01 2009-05-31 . chapter 15I know you wrote ths story a long time ago; but I just started it last night and I just had to review. I absolutely LOVED this story. It was so real. Oh, and I didn't even realize you were the author of "Summer Delights". I love that story as well. I just think you're a great author all together. So I'm gonna try to read all of your stories. Okay. Bye. |
 Alejandra 2009-05-15 . chapter 15 I just finished reading your story. I mostly just review the ones I really really like or the ones that I think they do deserve one review (I'm kind of lazy XD). Anyway, I wanted to say that I appreciated so much you're story. I loved the fact that you didn't turn the story into a Rin-cuts-herself-and-Sessh-saves-her. Mostly, I find it annoying that they introduce a guy into the story as the hero of all. But we girls can do much things for our own too. So, I really like you for taking a chance and finishing the story even thought I saw in one of your comments that some readers didn't want to know about it. I saw your profile and notice that you are one of those authors that do finish their stories!! Which I love because I'm so going to read more from you! XD Maybe I'll try the twilight one, it's just that I don't like reading unfinished things...it gets into my nerves! (And I'm not that much into twilight) Regarding the story I found something curious, in your notes you write like if you were in msn, but the story in fact is almost flawless of grammar or spelling mistakes. There are some, but I'm glad I gave myself the opportunity to read this one even if I thought at the beggining it was going to be writen as your notes. Keep writing please! Angsty moments rock!
Well, this was a long review XD In place of all the review I didn't write in each chapter. |
 Shinji and Shuu LUVR 2009-04-05 . chapter 1I LOVED this chappie^__^!** |
 minakurata-chan 2009-03-17 . chapter 15WOW! This was simply a great story it when to innocence too not so innocent to finally understanding the true beauty of being oneself. It was great. To bad theres no sequel :) well anyways ciao!
-mina |
 amy 2009-03-17 . chapter 15 i loved that story very cute but i feel sasd for rin when she got laughed at i almost cried. |
 MW 2009-03-02 . chapter 15 awsome. absolutely awsome. i actually started to cry when sesshomaru said that rin was the love of his life |
 achen92 2009-02-17 . chapter 1ur story makes me laugh too^_^ |