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| Lady Silver Witch 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abusenice job, very angsty. |
| xxBuffyfreakxx 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseVery nice really liked it. :D |
| Deathnotes 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseThis story really touches the heart; it really describes how he feels and I dunno, for some reason it just makes it easy to relate. Great job, by the way! |
| devoted99 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseAw.. poor Reid. It's so sad. I think I'm gonna cry. And you should be proud of this one, it's fantastic |
| blackpanther2288 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is a very good story. Are you going to continue or is it just a oneshot? |
| Deanne Stevenson 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseDisturbing. I feel his struggle. Good job. |
| kuruni 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseGood story, concept, etc. Looking forward for more info. |
| CatWillow 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the story! I liked how you tied in the traumas of his father leaving, being bullied, feeling like he wasn't making it in the FBI, and the addiction. I think you could have left out 2, maybe 3, "was weak" lines. We got it. Were you implying that the team knew he was an addict? They would never have tolerated that in the FBI. I'm prob. just reading wrong. You obviously have talent. Write more CM! |