|Reviews for Cross My Heart|
| minervathefeline 1/30/11 . chapter 5
I realize this story hasn't been updated in a while, but I thought I would review it anyway. It's really a fantastic story, I love the plotline and the characterizations. Minerva is so dry and Harry's mannerisms are fantastic. I like Daisy a lot, she's so cute.
I really hope you update this story; if you do, I promise to review every chapter! Thank you for writing it :)
| noodle-monster 8/21/10 . chapter 5
well, it looks like it might be a fun story once you get further along with it.
though i'm disappointed that once again silver is being used as a major weakness for vamps. it's werewolves that have the silver thing.
where did daisy come from all of a sudden? for that matter why did you make such a big deal about teasl when you haven't told us anything about her?
and then there's mcgonagal going on about grey or something. if i remember correctly she's still fairly old and had grey(ing) hair but you haven't made a point of describing if mcgonagal looks any younger or not than the version we're used to.
| bob dude 8/19/10 . chapter 5
this was not very good at all. what was the point of giveing harry another cousin? and if harrys house was still connected 2 the floo network than voldemort could have gotten 2 him at anytime via floo. and during goblet of fire arthur weasley even said i have ur floo connected MOMENTERALY! and wat was the point of putting some characters in a little paragraph then droping them completely?
| Paladin-kriss 7/8/10 . chapter 5
haha, that's guuna annoy the dursleys. but Petunia has magic in her family, even if she can't use it
| anonyme 6/24/10 . chapter 5
I am found of your story!
when do you write the next chapters?
I am waiting for the continuation with impatience!
| Unil Taftxuyu 6/23/10 . chapter 5
Just started reading this story after I saw it was updated. I really like how it's going so far! Keep it up!
| Myra the Dovahkiin 3/18/10 . chapter 4
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
This should also be under Family. By the way who is RR? The only person I know of with those initials is Rowena Ravenclaw? Harry should been paired with Luna.
| fraewyn 7/28/09 . chapter 4
Cant wait for more!
Um, I probably missed it somewhere in the story, but when was Daisy introduced?
| JD 7/16/09 . chapter 1
Your overall writing ability is above average for this site. Having said that you went so far into left field here that you would have created a better story and improved your writing ability more by just creating an original scenario versus mutating the HP storyline.
| minerva's-kitten 7/16/09 . chapter 4
AGH! Get Tom out of her head update!
| wandamarie 7/16/09 . chapter 4
thank you it was a good chapter hope you can up date when you can soon please thanks
| henriette 7/16/09 . chapter 4
| DramioneLurver 6/9/09 . chapter 3
Holy crud! What a bundle of info! Minerva's a vampire! That's... actually quite cool! I can't wait to see what a vampire is (exactly) in this world (it's sometimes a pain but almost more fun to have all the different sorts of vampires... The silver thing is definately a new twist. And holy crud, Minerva's sister is creepy. Seriously demented. And the Hannah bit was so intriquing! Man, living in the Riddle House? No thank you! That sounds so creepy... and the whole missing time slot tells me that it definately is! I can't wait to see what you do there as well. And then the prophecy on top of everything! Very mysterious, very interesting, very promising! Fabulous story so far.
| DramioneLurver 6/9/09 . chapter 2
Fabulous chapter! I know, it's been forever since I reviewed chapter one, but I finally made the time for it. I'm just in that kind of mood I suppose. I loved the new twists... so, I guessing that someting concerning Minerva's immortality has her sister hating her and thinking she's evil or some such rot? I loved the two-way mirror conversation (I still love your Albus/Minerva interaction!) as well. And the tiny glimpse into Hermione's summer life sounds depressing. I'm really interested in what you're going to do with her over the summer. Fabulous chapter, as always.
| Lady Mage 5/31/09 . chapter 3
Wow, what a great start to a story! I can't wait to see where you go from here and sincerely hope you update soon!