It's good, I just got confused at the ending. Did she have a premonition or something? Or is it like that Groundhog day movie where the guy repeats a day untill he gets it right?

Intense. Good job!

huh? what do you mean "flame away?" Your stories are great! XD

To me, your story is absolutely wondeful, the climax and ending were beautifully written. I like vocabulary and grammar! Please write more!

yay! it's longer! that's good. nice detail on the overall story and background, NOW WHY IS THE SAME THING HAPPENING AGAIN?! IS SAKURA CURSED ;-; sob... still, pretty good :)

WEll u made us longer but u left us hanging! seriously i loved it but it was like a cliffy at the end. so i suggest doing a squeal. either than that was awesome

That was good. I'm off to reading your other one. Ja na!