Nice. I love it. Keep it up.

that was really good. i liked it.

BYE!

Good story.

Aw it's over already T~T


That was a great story. I guess I'll go read other storys you made.

^-^ So GOOD!

write longer chapters. Write longer chapters!:(

awe, he so cute! love ur story, i am so sad it's over. *sigh* at least i now have more time to read ur other stories!

KIKYO BETTER BE DEAD! *growls ficiously*
Awe a cute little baby! *plays peek-a-boo with it*

WHAT! SHE LET KIKYO, THE WOMEN WHO IS TRYING TO KILL HER LIVE BUT NOT NARAKU WHEN HE ASKED FOR FORGIVENESS! And now look where that got her. plz continue!

YEAH! KIKYO'S DEAD! but i kinda feel bad for Naraku, it sounded like he really meant it and he had kinda been nice in the last few chapters... but i love this story! so plz continue!

love your story. Naraku! you can't say i didn't warn you now! *chases him around then finally throws flamethrowers at him.*
and Kikyo even though your not really doing anything bad in this chapter... DIE! *throws a sword through her back.*

cliffie! u got to continue! oh and that nightmare better not come true Naraku... *snarls furiously revealing two sharp fnags.*

YAY!
Narku since you've been good so far, i'm not going to kill you, but Kikyo on th other hand...
*grabs her neck an chokes her.*

wait one minute.
WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY YOU HATED KIKYO! SO FAR SHE's DOING MOST OF THE DAMAGE!?!

kagome so far i only heard Kikyo wanting to kill you, Naraku didn't exactly agree...
KIKYO DIE... yet again... HOW COME YOU NEVER STAY DEAD!?!?!?!? *repeatedly kills her and *keeps coming back. begins to stab her with dagger over and over saying 'die, die, die, die-'
Naraku you better not have agreed. *

that was sad and sweet... Inuyasha your so nice... but SOMEONE or should i say KIKYO should DIE! *throws her into an erupting valcano.*