Sweet!

Great job! This is one of the funniest things I have ever read! INUYASHA! XD

This is SO FUNNY! I laughed so hard I fell off my chair!(ouch)

Poor Paloma... will we see more of her? She's pretty cool. (I don't hate OCs! be afraid. be very afraid.)

keep it up!

heheh kikyou... too funny! keep ths up. I;m alerting :p

OH DEAR GODDESS I'M AFRAID...O_O

I love it!XD love it all!! plz update soon!

"Itachi said, displaying all the emotion of a stone sculpture."

"I'm part Venus flytrap and part Oreo"

XD! This had me bustin' out laughing! This is great. You should continue this. One of the best humor fics on this site. On top of that everyone's in character. Props to you.

omg are you sure you dont want to be a real boy? lol i love this! Onto chapter 3!
A.R.W.

haha i love this so much, he already has a seeing eye SHARK!! NO. HE NEEDS A DOG. GET HIM A DOG!!
omg that is the best! :D

A.R.W.

Excellent! Has me laughing every single time I read it.
Very original and funny approach on Blue/Konan and several other characters.

Also the star wars thing with Tobi never gets old :-)

hehe this is the most hilarios thing I have ever witnessed- read!

Yay! This is really hilarious. I love this fic! Great job.

Oh please continue! I'd love to see he men at work on this one!