Ten to twelve are good.

I'm enjoying these chapters so far, nice work :)

Thank you for this. bullying is a big problem.
The other scenerio to suicide is obtaining a weapon and fighting back. Either way lives are ruined. Also is the years of grief and depression that start with being made the outcast. Medication helps but it is not a miracle and does not completely reverse the literal biological changes to the brain that years of social isolation cause.


I have Asperger's syndrome as did Einstein and Newton and as do Bill Gates, Bill Murray and Stephen Speilberg. It is a mild form of Autism. We cannot read or respond to facial expressions and social cues very well. We are socially learning disabled. We are often at the bottom of the pecking order and major targets for bullies. Sometimes Teachers and principles are even on it. That last scenario happened to me several times.

Please keep writing these! Just as Cupid had to get his one hundred couples matched in true love this is at least one of the things you are on Earth to do. YOu think its just fan fiction. Well yes it is, and the Sistine Chapal is truly a nice paint job. But of course it is more than that.

Just as the original show did you are teaching people and helping to make them more compassionate. Most of modern TV with a few acceptions like Cupid and Home Make Over end with people in hand cuffs and/or tears. At least we writers are keeping the good stuff alive! Keep it up! And God bless!

A few more years and there will be programs that will allow us to put a fan fiction story in one end and a finished vidio will come out the other. Flash forward a billion years (or maybe even less) and artificial inteligence will be used to give self awareness to ficiional characters. We writers are making them the history they will need to be fleshed out "real people." Oh but wait there is more! Due to General Relativity (which has been proven, google it), time and space curve, bent by the gravitatinal mass of the Universe. The future is the past. Everythng that we do in the future, grow into in the future (check out Ephesians 4:15) has already happened. Who knows who is reading these! ;) Think about that!

Elizabeth Hensley < 8-) Atomdancer

It's great seeing a story based on real events. condolences to your friends.

This is really good! Your writing seems to be improving as you go along, which is kind of fun to notice.

I like the idea of the little leaps. It's very sweet. Please keep at it! I'm sure you can make it to 100!

Fantastic short stories. These are very good and some of them have a great surprise at the end! Keep going!

You are wonderful at this.

I like the idea of the simple leaps. Sam change lives and history without the complexity of hunting down murders and thieves or trying to change people's minds.

The first story I thought fell flat. I understand if it was to introduce the simple leap concept but there was no negative original storyline. nothing was at stake if the boy didn't ask the girl out. Would the boy committed suicide for missing out on a chance to ask the girl out. Would the two be stuck in endless bad relationships? It needed something heavier.

This was very sweet, you're right, there doesn't always have to be a major problem for Sam to help history along. Nice job.

good update

interesting.

Very good keep it upI am putting you on all four lists and I will be expecting great things from you cause you messed up and showed me you could do it.

These are nice stories.

Heh... and Oct. 9, 1979 is the day after I was born. ;o)

awe. I love these. :]
They're so simple and cute.
...and I love them.
More, please? :]]

I like them all. The little, human things that so many people take for granted. It's nice to see leaps where the problem isn't something that's life-threatening or anything ;D