aw!
i luv dis story!
you shood rite more!

I loved this story, it was very creatively done. A few grammatical errors though. Overall it was wodderful!

*grins* hahahaha, that was wonderful! ;D

oh, and happy easter. :) there's an easter egg hunt at my school, and i got all but three... *shrugs and laughs* it's fun, but they should put more eggs out to make it easier for other people to get some before people like me do...

*chekcs out other favs of yours*,
brittney

Aww, that's so sweet! Fluff is somewhat alright when it's not overdone. I do wish Minerva had died, though. I absolutely despise her. :)

porsche!
I hope it's yellow!
Like in Eclispe!
anyway, I love Holly, and Minerva needs to die!

Okay, so I read this one shot a while ago, bit I never reviewed amazingly. So here I am reviewing.

Amazing one shot! I really liked it, especially the part where he gave the rosebud to Holly. Disliked the Minerva part, but we'll all live.

A Porsche? Did you get that from Twilight?

Amazing job! It was awesome.

Aw. . . .So sweet!

aww. howsweet

I LOVE FLUFF! FLUFF IS AWESOME! ITS THE PERFECT THING TO READ IN YOUR FREEZING-COLD COMPUTER ROOM AT 9 P.M.! LONG LIVE THE FLUFF!

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AW! !

Thats so cute! I really like it. :) Great work, it was really really sweet. :) And the blooming rose was a great touch! Nicely done. Favd!

aw thats so cute!
minervas roses should have been black, but i guess arty wouldn't have done that...i would though lol

As Fluffy as cotten. As romantic as Holly's Great Grandfather. As sweet as honey. BUT... Artemis is TOTALY out of caricter!

Brilliant!

Loved it.

Aw! So sweet...Great job!