I must say, this tale was certainly fascinating to read. I thought it was well-paced, was wonderfully worded, and that equal attention was given to all of the key players. It appears to have been many months since you last updated, but if you ever decide to continue this tale, there will surely be many who will thank you for it.

Wow... I love it! The fight was very entertaining to read. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Oh, I don't think I've ever seen a story that had Raem's point of view of being defeated by the caravan before (your story about De Nam touched lightly on this, but it's not quite the same).

I'm not sure I understand Raem's curse. Is he cursing the actual Mount Kilanda or is he metaphorically cursing Anais Nin, making her infertile?

Looking forward to the next chapter,

SasukeBlade

Yay! Two updates! Both chapters very enjoyable. Please update when you can.

Oh, a nice chaptered fic. Though it's always irritating to hear this, I do hope you continue this soon.

I like that you neglect none of the characters. Even Dimo Nor (and is it just me, or do people in this section tend to neglect their Lilties?) gets a turn in the events.

Also, you have an interesting take on the Life magicite. While my personal take is something along the lines that the body has to be well enough to house the soul (in the case of Meteorology, all were too wounded to survive even if Surdather revived them) and that Cure can only work if the body can spare enough energy to repair itself. It's iffy, but it's the only way I could think of to explain how people died permanently in a place where they had the power to bring them back to life. However, your idea that they can continue to rise and carry on (which is probably closer to canon anyway) does raise a lot of deep questions which contribute to your story. For Raem, this must be indeed pesky (I can just see him screaming, "They're back AGAIN?!").

So far it's been great, and I like how now I can take your other poems and pieces and tie them back here. Nice work.

Aha! What a turn of events! I'm so glad you decided to revive my beloved Selkie, and then throw him into such good fortune. This has cheered me up no end. I rather enjoy your interpretation of moogle behaviour, on a side note. Eagerly awaiting Chapter 8!

This story is very interesting! I've never finished the game since I got bored with it, but you've inspired me to play it again! I'll be keeping an eye on apdates for this, so update soon, please!