AH so cute! :)

good job

YEA! FINALLY they confess their love for each other...i mean seriously, i thought they should've got together long before I was a yaoi fangirl and now...I'm complete lol

aw so sweet! I really like it

That's so cute, and it fits perfectly into the book. Would you ever add more to this? Tell more about what happens to Johnny and Ponyboy? I'd love to read it.

Aww. That's a really sweet story! Although I think it was a little rushed. They just spilled their feelings for each other. Next thing you know, they're calling each other honey and running away. Somehow it fit the scene, though. I don't know: when you think about it, it seems rushed, but when you read it, it seems fine.

I think you could worm this into the book: That was the real reason he ran away, but he didn't want to tell his English teacher , or something. Or was it already intended to be like that, and I just didn't catch on?

this is good should turn it in to a story

real sweet, keep it up?