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| Christiangreasergirl 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abusegood job |
| wintafaeriy 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseYEA! FINALLY they confess their love for each other...i mean seriously, i thought they should've got together long before I was a yaoi fangirl and now...I'm complete lol |
| The Kelsey Squirrel 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseaw so sweet! I really like it |
| Adrienne-sensei 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseThat's so cute, and it fits perfectly into the book. Would you ever add more to this? Tell more about what happens to Johnny and Ponyboy? I'd love to read it. |
| GoldenMerlin 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAww. That's a really sweet story! Although I think it was a little rushed. They just spilled their feelings for each other. Next thing you know, they're calling each other honey and running away. Somehow it fit the scene, though. I don't know: when you think about it, it seems rushed, but when you read it, it seems fine. I think you could worm this into the book: That was the real reason he ran away, but he didn't want to tell his English teacher , or something. Or was it already intended to be like that, and I just didn't catch on? |
| dreamer 3097 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusethis is good should turn it in to a story |
| Minami Ozaki Wannabe 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abusereal sweet, keep it up? |