That was great

Nice work on this :D I love the comparison going on between Jak before and after the eco treatment. Your choice of words are really fitting too since they help to set the mood. Keep up the great work -

The first time you read it, it's a little confusing but the second time it makes sense! Of course simple thing don't make sense to me when really strange, messed up, amd backwards thing do. I strange that way. ANYWAY, this was really good, kinda' sad but thats a good thing! Great job!