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Reviews For: D of Danny D of Daddy

Brooklyngirl86
2007-08-11
ch 2,
abusethis is a cute story but you have a lot a lot of grammer mistakes. like in chap. 1 after mac calls stella to say that Danny's wife died Stella says "I go there" that is not corrcet english. you might want to spell check before you post the next chapter.
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