Shine, Tucker, shine! What more can be said for this masterpiece that has me squirin' for chapter four?

This conversation goes to new heights. The complexness of it is magnificent. Loved Tuck's sarcasm, and how Danny is realizin' the error of his ways. Think before you act little ghostboy. And now I'll hangin' on the edge of my seat for chapter four. I want to know what Tuck went through.

S

Ah...so that's what "sotto voce" means. Thanks for the meanin' even if I did kinda get the hint that it was a "quite voice." :D

So you are continuin'. Yay! If Danny wants to apologize then I reckon you're goin' to let him. LOL

S

It would have been a cooler ending for this hapter if Danny said:

"I overshadowed him to take you to the dance instead of Valerie".

How do ya think Sam would have taken that?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Very well written, nice use of language, and quite realistic without pulling away from the basic feel of the show. And besides all that, Tucker's used a lot, and not just as mild comic relief, but as an actual character, as someone who feels, as someone who matters.

To top it all off it's got a lovely ending. No deux-ex-machina or half hearted happy ending, no instead you go for a more real and therefore, more meaningful ending.

Superb job here. Nice work.

Wow! Talk about fireworks! Loved how you explored the feelings of Tucker and Valerie after the dance. It's nice to see some 'loose ends' get tied up. You give Tucker justice. I like that; it always makes me feel bad when he's just treated like a 'techno-geek nerd' in the show especially in the new episodes. It's like he's not an important character anymore. (

Also, the fireworks definition exploration was a delightful treat.

"The second was the rapid-fire airing of five new Danny Phantom episodes during the week of July 9 through 13. Discouraged by the low quality of the writing in these third season episodes, I cued up a tape of older episodes that Saturday evening to refresh my memory of what made me love this series in the first place."

Wish had a tape like that at the moment. I'm goin' thru the same disappointment, which reminds me, I have a fanfic contest entry of my own I need to be workin' on! Well, I'll be seein' ya. I must go and fight the hundred plot bunnies who are attackin'. Back! Back! You long eared demons!

S

Truthfully, I really can't say as I blame him. I can see why Tucker's more than a little upset.

If Valerie ever finds out he WAS at the dance...*shudder*

Wow poor Tucker, he has one serious grudge on Danny, cant blame him though, but at least they will eventually get passed this little overshadowing event huh?.

And the last part with Danny and Sam? nice.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.