where do you get thise stuff? anway that was... how to put it... amazing.

more!more!

well, i just feel kinda awkward on how daisuke and satoshi talk to each other.but the whole package was good.

yeah!i wanted more!

good job!

you're really good at this!

again, good job! i enjoyed reading it!

really fun! i LOVE it! and i'm not against 14yr old sex.

WOW!

i admit...it's a whole lot fun...and not to mention...My Green minded part was reawakening...(Spinning Eyes with Drools) sorry... -o-

Ok was it the chocolate or Daisuke's...well y'know that riku put in?lol

great story it had me laughing a great deal lol

I must tell you this to start off, THIS STORY ROCKS. It is desriptive and has a great story line, plus stars my faviourite pairings. Please continue and update soon!
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That was funny. I enjoyed it a lot. I liked the idea of the chocolates. lol. well, keep writing. btw, this xxblakcxrosex4xskullzxx i just changed my name.

man that's the last chapter man what happens after I want to kno real bad nd I lik the um sex parts lol...

JEEZ WOW this is classic stuff! lol Loving every word!