|Reviews for The Ward of Organization XIII|
| Northerndawn 11/8/09 . chapter 6
Yay DemDem! I was listening to the "Sitar Song" by throughout this whole chapter. Over and over and over and over and over again. Lulz.
| purplesockz 8/18/09 . chapter 32
I'll be moving onto your sequel in a minute. I just have to review though, your story is that good.
Wow, that was mood whiplash. Really, everything thing seems so happy, and in the course of one chapter, this had become one of the most depressing stories I've ever read.
Way to tease us with your little trailer. Now I'm dying to read that second story, so I guess I'll go do that now.
Thanks for writing such a wonderful story.
| Dreamer on south 5th st 2/26/09 . chapter 10
Lawl. I was in tears and almost on the floor near the end of this chapter. Awesome story. I love it. Keep writing! _
Dreamer on south 5th st
| Talye Kendrin 2/10/09 . chapter 9
-just started reading this story yesterday-
The part with Zack made me cry... ;O;
| Anexi Naie Nightshade 1/28/09 . chapter 32
Okay you got some explaning do do girl if you think I am going to sit here and cry like a baby then you have got another thing you just made my one favorite carecter become more of a pervert(Axel) and then you go and make him the one who had betaed her that is gust wrong.I don't mean to be mean but it was really depresing for more thing before I go what is the next part of this going to be named because I am now wondering what is going to happen now.
Again sorry for being mean.
Axel fan girl 201
| Hijokugei 12/27/08 . chapter 17
HOLY FUCKSHIT! WHAT THE HELL IS ARES, A FREAKING PSYCHOTIC MANIAC? SHIT, THAT'S DISTURBING!
| Hijokugei 12/24/08 . chapter 8
Bloody fucking hell...
| Eiruiel 12/5/08 . chapter 32
“What are you talking about, Thief?”
“I'm talking about how the Heartless were drawn to you, even though Zack was the one doing all the fighting.”
“SO? The darkness can be fed by people's pain of sorrow. Apparently, you still haven't gotten over the man who broke your heart.”
“Th...you don't know anything about that.”
“...Aoife...you are not the first woman to have her heart broken by a man.”
NO! Heart-broken girls become too sulky (And sometimes spoiled! Not saying Aoife will. She's too amazing.) I hope Aoife gets over Axel. Sure, he's cool, I'll admit that, but right now I hate him for messing with her. :
| Wolves Call 11/23/08 . chapter 32
O_O I think I'm in love with your story...That's about all I can say...That and Jason's not the only one of your characters with fan's...*hides
| Tim Fortune 11/18/08 . chapter 32
Wellity, wellity, wellity. I can hardly wait. Esp. with the trailer.
As soon as it pops up, the Magnificent Tim Fortune shall be there, first in line to enjoy the massive spectacle. After all, I can't let a little bad blood spoil my enjoyment of a masterpiece, now can I?
Take your time in crafting it. While I may obessively check my e-mail everyday for any and all updates, I don't pressure anyone into completing the work. I know it takes forever.
And so, I sit and wait for Shatter Unsleep (awesome title by the way). I think maybe I should have read the trailer to the song you suggested, but the minute you said "Rime of the Ancient Mariner" I had to listen to the Maiden song about it. So, I'm well aware of the poem and what it means.
You got a nice tight little universe there, so I am impressed. And I might pick up FFX, as a friend of mine, who for all intents and purposes is Auron, suggested I give it a try.
And so I return to play with the Gods, which is what I relate to better than "average" people. May the Muses fill your head with bright sparkling light and open up the ultimate valves of creativity.
Missing your input, but fully acknowledging why it's not there,
Tim Fortune, Humbled by greatness
| Queen Baka 11/17/08 . chapter 32
Ya, i skipped to the trailer. what? it was really good but confusing. oh well. so many things to think about. well always waiting for the sequel.
| MysticSpiritus 11/16/08 . chapter 32
Oh, nice looking trailor. And the notes had me giggling too. Looking forward to Shatter Unsleep!
| GetYerZexiOn 11/16/08 . chapter 32
... Let's start from the beginning.
I love the bloopers, and teh part wiff Jason and Mason : "Is Jason high, drunk, or stoned?" LMFAO. They come from the same mother. Wow. xD : OMG. POTC : I KNEW IT WAS AIOFE IN THE POEM! : Jason
| Slice of American Cheese 11/16/08 . chapter 32
Oh...now I seriously can't wait AND have the itch to write something epic...There goes nearly all my extra time...ah Well...
Til I review for Shatter Unsleep,
Slice of American Cheese.
| GiantHouseKey 11/16/08 . chapter 32
I spazzed through all of this. As always, you pwn, Faerie! I can't wait for Shatter Unsleep! I think thats next to Re:CoM and even 358/2 Days on my most anticipated list!