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| PyroLyfe13 2007-07-25 ch 2,  | abuseI'm reviewin i'm reviewin jus dont kill Cloud please **sobs** j/k i like ur story its really coo so far! |
| combo-bass 2007-07-25 ch 2, | abuseSorry to hear about your foot. Toes are tricky things to break (as are tail bones) since there isn't much you can do about it. I just hope they heal quickly enough for you. Sorry again for the slow review. I got the notice a couple of days ago, but I was avoiding the internet like the plague until I finished Harry Potter. Didn't want to risk any spoilers (not that I think your story had spoilers). I'm just paranoid like that. So, another exciting chapter here. There are some interesting/different relationships happening in this story and I enjoy the variety. I'm interested to see who Cloud will end up with (assuming he's alive ~_^). I've never read RikuxRoxas either, so that pairing intrigues me. Um, so yeah. That's all for now. Later! ^_^ |
| porygon181 2007-07-23 ch 2, | abuseDialogue = priceless. Still fuzzy on what the plot is, but what difference does it make when one can read jailbait jokes? XD |
| xcrying bunny 2007-07-23 ch 2, | abuseHa Riku can tell the truth and be funny at the same time (hehe i'm feeling so giddy right now, dont ask why). Keep up the good work. I reviewed so no kill Cloudy :D |
| BlackIceNinja 2007-07-22 ch 2, | abuseWell, it just seems to be in a bit different style, that's all. And you do have a knack for killing people don't you? haha. good first actual chapter. Yeah, textbooks are way too expensive...I'm going on strike...okay, not really. |
| BlackIceNinja 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI really loved the opening portion, and the rest was a bit...it seemed a bit not like you, but I guess cuz you're trying something a little different, but kudos to you for actually reading your textbook, I didn't bother... |
| fayearashai 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseM, this seems really neat. Cloud's computer-ineptness is adorable. =D Great goin'! |
| Born To Be Beheaded 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusei like it so far! |
| combo-bass 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThis should already be a given but I think you're brilliantly creative and everytime I read something new from you I get hooked. I'm glad that you have a plan going for this one with some foreseeable end in the future. Plans are good (so is spontaneity) but it's good to have some closure every once in awhile. I really don't have much else to say except the usual, "can't wait for the next update" line. Oh, and compared to most authors on my alert list, you are more reliable when it comes to updates. Don't change that. ^_^ -combo- |