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Dots On Spots
2009-12-01 . chapter 11
Hehe! I can't believe I didn't see this wonderful story until now~ Updates~ *.* -Hugs you very tightly- Do I get a cookie for reviewing? :P
ninja-charlie92
2009-09-02 . chapter 11
awesome whats gonna happen next i cant wait to find out
genderless-but straight
2009-08-16 . chapter 11
more please!! :D
5Angel
2009-08-16 . chapter 11
I feel like such a perv LOL.

The truth is it was the HOTTness factor of the lemons/limes(? whatever they're called) that glued my attention, the premise is good not great and a whole lot of annoying misspelt words, runonwo rdsli kethis as well as the wrong grammers is used was the day before etc.

Unbelievably though, the HOTTness of those SCENES are nothing compared to the depths you've delved this into. It's human, you deal with human issues, its simplicities that we take for granted, quite a few times I saw my own caffeine addiction days LOL...gossipmongering, jealousy, lust, abuse (uh oh I tried to skip that bit ;)) etc...

You built from sthing small and layered it and it's beautiful to read and share in that.

Sasuke really blows me away. Naruto in his Dobe oafish way is so callous with Sasuke's heart, they are drawn to each other and have yet to understand. I love the dimensions to the characters and the sense of being soul mates which Naruto's dream hints at. I also can't wait to read more about his history with "sensei" presumably Minato being mentioned by Obito and Kakashi.

Sasuke has so much to lose, I love him, and the sensitivity of their "night" is captivating. LOVE!

I love your version of the pink banshee, let's face it; would love her to get swallowed up by a goukyuaan(?) fire jutsu or rasenshuriken LOL.

Can't wait for more...however long it takes :)
Hime-Miko-Love
2009-08-07 . chapter 11
Please update FAST! I can't wait! How many more chapters are you planning on doing? PLEASE! UPDATE! :D
Natsukimpd
2009-08-05 . chapter 11
god i was scared id like this story cuz you update hecka slow. oh well im willing to wait its a good story
animelove20
2009-06-30 . chapter 11
heyy
i seriously love ur storrii
please update soon xD
i cant wait 4 more sasunaru moments
melissaaax3
2009-06-22 . chapter 11
hah.
sasuke is in for a surprise!
can't wait for the update.
- - melissax3
Deidara-Danna-sama
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
Lmao omg I luf this story.
Although me ** cuz..WHEN ISH THEY GONNA BE A COUPLE!?DX I'm dying here!!(random/bipolar moment)anywho..keep writing though un^^' I really do like it though^^
xHinata Uzumakix
2009-06-06 . chapter 11
PWEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!
Cutie_K
2009-06-05 . chapter 11
Awesome, I can't wait to read what happens next
lil-Vixen24
2009-05-27 . chapter 11
omg! its been like FOREVER!! i almost forgot about this fic ... but i was bouncing up and down in my chair when i saw that it was updated lolz X3
sakurarie
2009-05-27 . chapter 11
it's good and i'm happy that you update after waiting for a long time
allieboo2u
2009-05-26 . chapter 11
MORE! I MUST HAVE MORE!
narsas
2009-05-26 . chapter 11
haha Sasuke is such a mother hen to Naruto.. and usually that role is filled by Iruka. haha
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