No... NOOO! You dropped the story? WHY? Aww, that's terrible! I wanna know what happens! How does Nanoha get her sight back? Does Yuuno's device work? Does Aura come back? And what about the exams?

Aw man, I am SO bummed! To the point where I actually use that ridiculous term! Aw, man...

I look foreword to the next chapters of this fic/story. I hope that you do finish with this one. I have this one on story alert for updates. I love your stuff! Keep up the great works!

wow .. the entire series is AWESOME .. jsut the right amount of NanoFate, fluffyness, drama & action .. but PLEASE finish Redemption ?

will u continue this story...it's really good.

I love love love your story and realize you haven't updated in a long while, but I do hope you'll finish up the story for everyone if you get the opprtunity. The 6th Division series you created is great.

Well I've read most of your stories already, and am a huge huge fan of your writing and portrayal of the NanoFate pairing. I'm writing the review to try and encourage you to finish up the story! It's been three years, but this is the final chapter and I really really hope you can find the time to finish.

As for reviews on correcting writing, there's nothing really to correct aside from a grammar error here and there, but it's whatever.

On that note, finish your story pretty please! It's shame to leave it hanging like that.

P.S. Vampire! Fate is awesome as well. Keep up the great writing.

Protip: Dilated means expanded; if Fate's eyes dilated, there would be nothing but black left. (Unless the lighting is such that you can see into the back of her eye as it expands.)
Also, Fate does strike me as the desperately clingy type in this story, but I think she's more stable around the time of StrikerS than she would be if she lost Nanoha in say... A's.

I really love this series! I know you havent updated in almost 3 years, but I'm still hoping to see an ending to this.

You're a really amazing writer and you've really sucked me into this story line. Each character is written beautifully and I hope to see more of this soon.

i liked your story... it really captured my interest i wish you update soon on ur fanfics

aah i've read your 6th division stories many times over and i guess i never reviewed. but I LOVE IT! just wondering...will u pick this story back up? if not, do you have a summary of the ending? wishful thinking? hee

Oh man this would be awesome if it were finished. But it's been a while. well all in all i love the story, and really hope you pick this back up and finished sometime soon...

omg please finish this story! it's too good to leave sitting!

Really interesting story, can't wait to read how it goes on, update asap, will u? 3

Gochisosama!

That was one fine feast of fluff! 3

Ew...dotHack...