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| anyareed 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this. The image of Kara trying to strut while pregnant was funny. It was hard for me to imagine Lee hitting Kara while she was pregnant, but I can totally see her smacking him in the nose in some sort of hormonal rage. I always enjoy your writing - keep doing so! |
| blameamy 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseyes that is how it should be |
| JacobedRose 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this story, even if I do feel a little sorry for Sam, this is how I imagined there relationship. Nice job. |
| Maevenly 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseLatteAddict, This was great; the only thing I had a little trouble with was the connotation that Lee would pop Kara in the mouth while she was pregnant. Other than that, I totally loved reading Sam's thoughts, especially the snarky ones about how Kara busted his nose! Maevenly |
| reflexorozy 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like to imagine Starbuck trying to waddle around like a bad ** while she's pregnant. Thank you. |