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anyareed
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed this. The image of Kara trying to strut while pregnant was funny. It was hard for me to imagine Lee hitting Kara while she was pregnant, but I can totally see her smacking him in the nose in some sort of hormonal rage. I always enjoy your writing - keep doing so!
blameamy
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseyes that is how it should be
JacobedRose
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseI love this story, even if I do feel a little sorry for Sam, this is how I imagined there relationship. Nice job.
Maevenly
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseLatteAddict,

This was great; the only thing I had a little trouble with was the connotation that Lee would pop Kara in the mouth while she was pregnant. Other than that, I totally loved reading Sam's thoughts, especially the snarky ones about how Kara busted his nose!

Maevenly
reflexorozy
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseI really like to imagine Starbuck trying to waddle around like a bad ** while she's pregnant. Thank you.
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