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KatherineGrace79
2008-08-02
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow, I really loved this. This was an excellent piece. Percy is a complicated character who did not get enough time in the limelight in the books, or the movies. No matter what though, he is a Weasley and he is a Gryffindor and I think that you captured this perfectly.

Kate
JACk Sparrow's Rum
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is a wonderful story, really. But I'm not quite satisfied with it.

You're so right that Percy is never included and I can never really forgive the other Weasleys for that. I mean, c'mon, I never really get along with my brothers but that doesn't mean I have to actually ignore them or.. LOCK THEM IN A PYRAMID. The curses in there and such, I can't believe Fred and George did that!

And Ron complaining when Percy told him off for being in the girls' bathroom or for Percy caring about him so much that he acted differently in front of the Ministry. I mean, they're just so... URGH.

And they are actually surprised that Percy finally grew some back bone and left. And when he does come back, only Percy apologizes! GEES! I still feel so much resentment towards them.

But I do love this story. And I'm so happy Fred lives here. :)
qt4good
2008-02-09
ch 1,
abuseGood work :D
Majestically Mystical
2007-11-23
ch 1,
abuseSo depressing... Poor Percy.

At least it had a happy ending. :3
FreeSpritSprite
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abusevery sweet ending, thanks.
meenyrocks
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abusethis was brlliant-i always think with hp it's hard to understand percy's feelings, they've not really developed enough for us to understand. so taking that into consideration, i think you've done an amazing job (as always-like i ever need to give you a bad review!) sounds pretty much like what i'd have thought he'd sound like.

(btw sorry for being all emotional on LJ- i've got a place at a uni doing something optometry related which i'm really looking forward to! two weeks before i move away from home..its scary, especially seeing as i don't know how to cook/do laundry/look after myself!)
The Sushi Monster
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseAw, I'm loving Percy after DH. And it was really nice to see something from his POV.
ChrissyTNG
2007-08-06
ch 1,
abuseThis was a good one shot! You really deepened Percy's character. I liked seeing things from his POV for once. I always knew he cared for the rest of the family!
Paige Halliwell
2007-08-01
ch 1,
abuseThis was really great :) I've always thought there was more to Percy and this story showed it in an excellent way!
Sokorra Lewis
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseI liked this alot, especially your characterization of Percy. Its nice to see soemthing that doesn't have Percy as either dead or evil.
WAYAMY27NARF
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseAWESOME!! Wow, I really needed that new outlook on Percy. I didn't like thinking that Percy was doomed to be a prat. All the signs were there that he did care. Thanks for this!!

Amy "Someday I'll be famous" Napierkowski WAYAMY27NARF
out of the ashes
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this little story. Never thought about Percy before and what caused him to do the things he did, but this certainly made sense. The ending leaves a very nice touch.
SunshinePie
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this percy fic you wrote. I think you made some really good points on percy's defense and I love these types of stories about percy and his family. i thought you did really well on this and I have to say this is my favorite story about percy and his family problems! *hands virtual cookie*
anonymous
2007-07-17
ch 1, anon.
abusegood chapter
Lyn Rulez
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abusehey i like this one-shot
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