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| ShadeShadow 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseWhen you going to update you have had me wondering for a long time? Love the chapter by the way |
| Chibi-Yaten 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. It's really interesting and I can't wait for an update! ~Chibi-Yaten~ |
| Miss DnG 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseOh good fic ;) as usual! I'm hopeing you'll be able to update a Kiss in the Dark soon too though so i'll keep my fingers crossed! :) |
| Serenity-hime 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseLet me just say that I absolutely LOVE this story. There are, of course, places that are rough but that's totally understandable given that this was written 8 years ago. I think the premise is really interesting - I like that there's more of a sexual tension between Sarah and Jareth, which they couldn't exactly put in the movie given that it was, to some extent, made for kids. I hope her and Usagi hit it off really well, and I hope she comes to help Usa and Mamoru get back together. I was a little sad that there wasn't interaction between the two of them in this chapter but hey, lots of setup is nice ^_^ The only thing is, I don't see how Sarah's father would have let her step-mother send her away. I think that whole scene is kind of rough with all the emotions bouncing around, especially the seemingly pure hatred coming from the step-mom. But again, written 8 years ago, I totally understand :) I really, really hope to see more of this soon. I absolutely love Labyrinth, and of course I'm all about Sailor Moon. I incredibly enjoy well-written crossovers, and this definitely seems to be one! Please update soon, and I hope your back starts to feel better *hugs* ~Serenity-hime |
| laughingatmyself 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusei am not very familiar with the Labrynth story, but i am intrigued as to how you will meld the story with that of Sailor Moon. do i see the rescue of Toby in the future? |