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callmefall
2008-07-01 . chapter 1
Aw! That's so sweet!
qt4good
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
Cute! :D
siriusedwardLOVE
2007-09-06 . chapter 1
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! clumsy james.amazing!
amortentiaaa
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
absolutely adore the ending
Lady Livia
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Ohh I love you so bad !
This story is amazing!

"Sirius began to fiddle, moving bits of fluff from one side of the sofa arm to the other, and then trying to build a monument to his greatness with them."


hahaha! I love it!
James is way to sweet too...
If i didn't love Sirius so much.. well.. *hides from Michaela*


Yay!

*Adds to favs*
FizzingWhizbeez
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
Aw that was SO GOOD! That was the cutest Lily/James oneshot I've read in a long time. I wish I could include all the little phrases in the story that made me smile, but then I'd have to copy and paste the entire story into this review! :) That was so sweet, how they both thought they were making fools out of themselves when in fact, it made them all the more endearing and perfectly un-perfect to the other person. Great fic!
just giddy
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
omg. so cute. cliched ending but it was completely called for.
so so so so so so so so so so cute.

coughshipjumpercough
KIDDING! im like the queen of that but weve always dicussed that. but wow, just so adorable. you know its stories like these that maked james so steal-able which in turn makes me like a harry a little bit more.

not that i dont like harry, but the movies just make me unjustifiably mad at him. yeah, i dont get it either.

hahaha
lots o love!
SummerSweetMelody
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
aw. i loved it. absolutely loved it. everything was so perfect and extremely well written! I guess james really isnt that bad a singer after all!

amazing story :]

xLaken
BigEnoughUmbrella
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
very sweet.
xx.just.a.contradiction.xx
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
naww. Kate, this was adorable! one of the cutest things i've ever read. Lily, James, Sirius and Remus are all in perfect character.. Sirius was my favourite though, so, well, Sirius-y, lol.

loved this: "Sirius and food appreciation was a almost perfect match." and then how it went on about the house elves, hahaha. so good.

all in all, great to see you back - i've missed your writing so-so-so much! =]

love ya,
Ash x
SingingBird812
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
Nice story! I enjoyed reading it. :D
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