I hope that Vergil doesn't stay in hell like he did at the end of the game. I don't want him to be Mundus's witch with a capitol B again. Update soon, please.

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hurry and update! its been more than half a year since you updated hurry up and update!

What a lovely new chapter! So, how is it in the Air Force? I am seriously considering the Navy, but basic training still kind of scares me.

you were in basic training for the air force? Either I missed a whole three months of everything else i was doing or you didn't write that in the last chapter. Anyways, the Temin-ni-gru is back is it? (or is this the first time? A.K.A dmc3?)

Hm, I wonder what the twins are gonna do now...? But first things first.

OMG yay Eva's not dead!1!1 - and so on. Seriously, I'm definitely glad you didn't kill her off. Now we have all sorts of opportunities to see what happens when the family actually works together. (Damn, Arkham's so gonna get it. >=D)

I'm glad you're off hiatus, too.

From a technical perspective, I'd suggest (what a surprise) putting a little more descriptive action in there. Like, when Dante leaves, you could say something like: "Sardonic smirk pasted across his face, Dante turned sharply, causing his coat to flair dramatically. Then he walked casually out of the room without so much as a word of condolance, waving as he went!"

Um, that's not the best example. But you see what I mean, right? Just put a little more attention to details like how his coat swirls when he turns around (probably does it on purpose 'cause it's dramatic, the show-off), and you should be fine. =D

I am glad to see your piece update and with Eva in "supermom" mode no less! XD I can not wait for another chapter... hope to see one soon.

Yeah, who knows? Still...Virgil! See that stupid sign! He talks too much therefore he is annoyingly EVIL! Virgil is my favorite, and if Eva had been characterized in the game like she is in your story, I'm sure she would have been a close second. Keep up the great work!

DMK

#4 is really good I haven't played it but i've seen people play it. And YES Eva isn't dead I hope she stays alive

coolio(yes that was so lame)chp 10 loved it

Whoo! Can't wait to read more! Hopefully since Vergil hasn't been blinded by the lust for power all his life, he will be able to see Arkham for who he really is before it's too late. I mean, I don't see how he missed that one. Anyone who talks that much is like having a neon sign blinking above their heads that says "TRAITOR!". Anyhow, keep up the good work!

DMK

Why does Vergil have to be so power hungry? *headdesk* I think she had a nightmare about her mum...

Great Chapter... I guess I have a thing for DMC 3 stories. Please update soon :D

YAY! First time i read a DMC and i pcked a kickass one! -glomps YinYang-

Story is great so far! I'm guessing that you are and RE fan too? I really like how this is going so far, but I"m wondering what part Ken has to play? Anyhow, the ritual was great, and the description was awesome. Keep it up!

DMK

Well done! I am addicted! I'm surprised I have not read and reviewed for you before.