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| anonymous 2007-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't really like this story, mainly due to the whole virus thing, I mean, come on, you can do better than this. Why did you take the lazy way out when writing this type of Fanfiction? Seriously. Next time, could you come up with something else? Please? Thanks. |
| Black Waltz 0 2007-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseWell, if the former reviewer won't show a childish display of emotion; I sure will. WAh... Poor little robots. That was depressing, I'm gonna be thinking about this all day. But still, excellent writing. |
| Fusionmix 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuse-very long pause- -nose blowing sound- I could type a long line of 'WAH' here, but I've decided that instead, I'll just say this: You did an incredible job. I did see where a nitpicker could yammer on about the 'virus' thing, but it didn't need to be gone into more. It just was, and it couldn't be erased. |