Hello!

Wow, this was a really really good story! (i cant believe it only has 2 reviews!) I enjoyed it immensly. I think you kept everyone in character, especially Rikku, with the layout/structure of your sentances and the way you phrased them. Paine was very in character also. My fav bits were:

"There's an awful lot to tell, about Tidus and his abs and the cold Ronso mountains and Seymour was really truly gay, and Auron teasing her in the Thunder Plains, and Lulu wouldn't even give Wakka the time of the day before, but it's a fun story" and "...and Grandpa Auron, and Kimahri who was just Kimahri because he didn't exactly fit the pet bill"

Sorry for the awfully long review ; I just really loved it!

Regards,

Ceres

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I think that you did awesome with this fic!

I loved it. You wrote about something simple but made it complex at the same time. I really liked the way you portrayed Rikku and Paine. It's just how I imagine them to be. The game made them be so flat.

well, anyways, I liked your story