This is a very good story. I love your writing.

dammn aragorn always seems to get injured tut tut tut how many times before he learns that he has to be careful

Yeah, I wished Elrond was there to help him too! Poor battered guy. I liked this chapter though. I thought it was the best. BTW, I left out the word "ribs" in my one review, just in case you were wondering. So much for me giving tips...

You definitely kept my interest throughout this story, and I enjoyed reading it. However, and don't take this the wrong way, I do feel think that Thorongil's injuries/beatings/etc., would have made it impossible for him to have ridden a horse as he does at the end of this story. If a man were that bad off in real life he wouldn't be able to raise his head, let alone ride a horse. But still, I'm usually willing to suspend belief when it comes to Aragorn stories. It might be something for you to keep in mind in the future though.

"Now he watched him for a moment before raising his feet which met Aragorn’s ribs, the ranger cry out from the pain, his hands soon clutches his side, trying to protect his ribs from more beating.

I know English isn't your first language so here's a tip. You might be able to improve on a sentence like that as follows: "Denethor watched for a moment, before kicking his foot into Aragorn's ribs. The ranger cried out in pain and he instinctively clutched at his trying to protect them from further abuse." Not perfect by any means, but a little smoother flow of words. Overall, though, I like the story and if I have to accept that Denethor is this evil, I will.

This chapter was fairly good too. I noticed that you used the phrase "filthy man" three different times in this one short chapter so you may want to ease up on overuse of phrases like that. But the angst is pretty good and I do see an improvement in your writing.

Sivan, this is a fairly good start to your story.

Great ending :) Good story. I am going to look through more of your work.

I loved all of this, but especially the way you write Finduilas. She was always one of my favorites, and so few people ever write about her. Thank you!

You know, i've been reading many fics of yours, but when you did not update Alias, i thought you had forgotten it. Good i was i wrong. another great story!

today was indeed a good day! i was checking some fics and see what i found: "Alias" is now completed! it's good that you were able to finish it, i was eager to know how the story would end =)
and i might tell you that i really appreciate not only the end, but the whole story. it was a pretty nice time that i spent reading your work...
kisses
ps: i'm looking forward for another marvelous work of yours!!

Looks to me like Denethor needs to learn not to mess with his wife. She is one tough lady and no mistake.

Ah, thank you for updating! GO FEMINISTS! :D

Lol, I simply need the end in a torture story, I hate the idea of leaving my baby in some cold dangeon delirious with pain.

I can't say that I liked your portrayal of Denethor, I imagine him more honourable, a worthy Steward of Gondor until he has fallen to the palantír's madness.

But the angst was very good, and I was holding my breath throuh the whole story. (Well, with a pause for breathing before the last update, lol).

And I had the feeling from the rest of the story, that Aragorn was half-dead at the end, I can't imagine how he was able to ride a horse, even get to Rivendell on his own. I was hoping to see his brothers or Legolas come for him, and tend to his wounds, and for a longer scene with Elrod at the end. But Finduilas and the women definitely surprised me, there is more in them that meets the eye! :)

Any chance that you will continue this story?

Beatings, torture, fear, angst. Poor Aragorn. I love this stuff. I can't get enough of it. So, Denethor is behind this. That doesn't surprise me, especially since he knows who Aragorn is here. This is really good. Keep the story coming, love it. I can't wait to read more!! Good stuff.