That was really awesome... beautifully written. The way you describe her character was really moving.. bit creepy though when the link to Gin was revealed. I have never imagined Vermouth's past that way.. hope you write the next chapter

Wow.

That was breathtakingly spectacular. I mean, you portrayed Vermouth in the most perfect manner, and her relationship with Yukiko, and later, Ran? Just amazing. Spot-on. And ending it with Gin and how he's just like her (and the fruit doesn't fall far from the tree?). I'm just speechless with the pure WIN from this fanfiction.

WOW!
Great story, update more!

This is beautifully written. I was looking for some good Vermouth fic out on the intarnets so I could do research for the one I'm going to write, and this was seriously perfect. You really rounded out her character, gave her an interesting past, and added really amazing details. I loved how Gin was her son. 8D Wonderful flow in here. I love this fic to pieces.

Wow...that was amazing. Genius. :D!

Wow...Amazing! I loved the structured relationships, the dark twists and the turns ^_^ This has got to be one of the best fics on Vermouth that I've read so far. Great job !

...*Wow*. I loved it. The relationships you structured were novel and great.

Wow, I certainly wasn't expecting that. Great fic and nice twist at the end!

(I'll never be able to read a Gin/Vermouth fic from now on, though... xD)

THAT was a twist XD Very awesome... very different... and I would have never looked at it that way- but very neat. ^^ I like the perspective. Great job.

Wow. A few typos (that take away nothing) here and there (if you want me to point them out?) and still one word: wow.

A lovely exploration of her character and back story and... boy I love the "twist"!
Bravo! XD

Amazing. I love the darkness and absurdity explored.