Nice job! Thanks!

That was simply beautiful!
I loved the scene when you describe Holmes sleeping and the child sleeping with him, as if she was his child.

With most sincere compliments,

Marianne

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I KNEW IT! I KNEW HOLMES WAS GOING TO GIVE THE BRIDE AWAY, I JUST KNEW IT! MWAHAHAHAHA!

I mean, ahem, I had some idea in that direction...

a wonderful story, very well done, and you've made both Holmes and Watson so lovably themselves *sniff*

that is just too cute for words, aw! Holmes is suck a sweetheart :P

and what do you MEAN a LIBERTY HAT?!?! you send him back here right now, you, you...you person you! Boz, are you listening to me, you're being infected by her American-ness! this has to stop, NOW!

"Who do you think you are sir!? You, who cares more for his cursed reputation than for the safety of his own child! You touch him again and by heaven sir, I'll not answer for what follows!"

wow! awsome, I loved that part, amazing story as always your crazy Texan you. by the way, Boz is gone again, but if he comes back wearing anything with the word Disneyland on it, I'm holding you personally responcible!

Oh, wow. Sorry it took me so long to review! I kind of had to go back and read the whole thing again first.

So... it's so cute! You have the perfect ending. I'm so glad you added the "Thirteen Years Later" part. It's adorable. Completely adorable. (Yet in character!)

And reading your author's notes made me feel so special. I did enjoy the bits of history.

On to the poll on your profile!

~Saru Wolfe

Yay! It's finally over! Now for the next one... Just kidding:-) I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for finishing it. And thank you for the thank you.!

I think NEVER in my long life i give a more useful and lucky push! My dear friend: you surpassed yourself in this MAGNIFIC end. Is... is... well, i don't have enough language to express my admiration.
Only a last sentece: Thank for sharing your talent and your time with us. Now, you could take a good time (well, perhaps some days) and then... the terribe hordes of reders start to cry for more works, i warn you!! *evil laugh*

Bravissimo, bravo! I really like the way you ended this story— especially the last sentence...Good job!

Aw... Always glad to see a happy ending ^.^

Waw-hay! Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! And *of course* Holmes would give the bride away - who else would be so suitable? And the school... lol, I can see why you chose it.

Mae carnen! Brilliant!! ^_^

That was a great ending

AND? Please update!

Good Story

Aww... That's so sweet. I hope he does keep her. This is such a wonderful story.