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waveform
2009-12-07 . chapter 9
I feel bad foe Elita. She realized too late who really held her spark. And now she has to fight to pull herself together in order to face the Decepticons one more time.

I also feel bad for Ultra Magnus. He realized that the Fem he loved actually loved another. He was a big enough bot to let her go. However, he's got a thick enough cranium to think that Ron, who is a Prime, would sit idly by and watch his home planet get decimated.

Now the Autobots have broken ranks with their commander, and are ready to follow a human Prime into battle against impossible odds. May the next and greatest Prime arise soon, so that the Autobots can finally defeat their enemies.
dr-fan/mai-lover
2009-12-07 . chapter 9
will-ther-be--kimposslibe''-terasnformed@-made
will-ther-be-kimposslibe-caeroosover-jem-in-the-works
FluffyBiscuits
2009-12-07 . chapter 7
Why am I thinking of high lander all the sudden?
FluffyBiscuits
2009-12-07 . chapter 6
Hm...I'm guessing next chapter Ron gets knocked out and Kim is attempting to revive him.
FluffyBiscuits
2009-12-07 . chapter 5
Bumblebee will possess the knowledge! Just kidding!
naruhina-otaku
2009-12-06 . chapter 9
DUDE OPTIMUS I WAS WONDERIN WHERE HE WAS ALL**ING RIGHT MAN BOOYAH
Shrike176
2009-12-06 . chapter 9
Well, it looks like Kim was wrong about the what going back to Ron would do to him. I'd say she really helped him grow into his leadership role.

Felt bad for Optimus, but he did the right thing ending it with Elita, she might have stayed with him but it would have been for all the wrong reasons.

Your spoiler makes me wonder if Orion will be coming back for good or just to settle unfinished business.

Either way, looking forward it it.
Heero Mccloud
2009-12-06 . chapter 9
Great chapter can't wait till the next one please hurry and write more chapters.
Katsumara
2009-12-06 . chapter 9
Awesome, awesome chapter as always, CC. I just loved it. From the ample amount of fluff (I do love me some fluff), to the sad part about Orion Pax being sent off.. and finally ending with Ron taking control of things. All so very cool, buddy.
Sean Malloy-1
2009-12-05 . chapter 9
Very good job on the new chapter, I'm hoping that you'll add more to this story soon.

-Any clue how long this fic will be?
Comet Moon
2009-12-05 . chapter 9
And the boy has become the man

BBOOYYAH

Nice funneral, though I wonder how many of those Autobots were just going through the motions of honoring him in fear of Elita.

And Ron.

And will you be dealing with the age thing. (Interesting twist if he finishes his transformation by merging with the Lotus blade.

Well, Ultra show the true him, in he is in the middle. Releases Lita, gives Orion his honors, but afraid to take the risk on the final conflict.

MrDrP needs to get it togther. And not insult MrsDrP. I doubt they were virgins, and that would be a two-faced slap in the face.


LOVE ya dude.

As for requests, how about the KP/Wonder Woman fusion

Ja ne

Jim
Toa Naruto
2009-12-05 . chapter 9
So Megatron got his revenge on the Trion council, and now has the Key of Vector Sigma (wasn't expecting there to be TWO macguffins). Although I'm kinda sad that Alpha T. is dead, but that's not the case for Beta and Gamma; they reminded me of the Central 46 from BLEACH.

the only two things that I think that you might want to recheck is:

Kim says "By the by", did she mean to say "by the way"

and when Ron was holding and summoning the Lotus Blade, I think you meant to say "scabbard", because a "scarab" is a type of beetle in Egypt

Yay! 2009 Movie Optimus Prime comes back! Out of curiosity, is The Fallen(ROTF) going to make an apperance?

Will the Autobots learn of the Trion Council's demise?

Keep up the good work!
readerjunkie
2009-12-05 . chapter 9
Oh. Such an evil evil place to end the chapter. Haha. I gotta say this is a excellent story. I'm sad to see that theirs only one chapter to go before it finished. I hope that you have a sequel planned for it. Don't make us wait to long for the finish. Excellent work and thank you for your efforts.
dr-fan/mai-lover
2009-12-03 . chapter 8
bervo what-happin-to-you-kp-caeroosover-waith-teenagmtuain-nija-terurles
who-kaew-sgho&dr-d-aer-mom&dad
dr-fan/mai-lover
2009-11-30 . chapter 7
bervo about-kimposslibe-got-cawd-out-bey-yori&ron about kimposslibe-being-a-jaerk/parick
can-terasfnfomer-caeroosover-waith-jem-work
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