That last chapter was EPIC.

Okay here is what I found wrong with your fic: 1: Naruto is out of character he would never stutter and he isn't a wimp.
2. Naruto is too dumb, in the manga although Naruto is clueless about somethings he is not down right stupid he just doesn't get things right away. He is actually quite bright in some regards. 3. "His voice was like velvet to the blond's ears ears" first of all "blond's" translate to "blond is" it should be spelt blondes, secondly velvet is a color it has no sound.

man dude u have to hurry haha holy ramen flavored ** cakes*wipes tear* classic im so gonna freak someone out saying that *evil smiles apears on my face and a dark aura has ingolfed me*i love it u have to finish i will hunt u down dude HUNT YOU DOWN

maybe they could have a coming out party for naruto!! :D That would be so cute! :3

of course he want ramen i mean hello there food involved ^^

Awesomeness! So AWESOME! You're awesome at writing stories. Keep it up!

And an idea would be for Kakashi to kidnap Iruka randomly and bring him to an empty hallway and they do their KakaIru stuff!

RUN IRUKA-CHAN!! RUN!...MORE PLEASE!

i love this fic! i found it on deviantART and the 5th chapter wasn't thier so i looked on your other page and found the link in your signature, and well here i am! and i love it! is there going to be more? i love the idea of having some (or all?) of the Sasuke fangirls be SasuNaru fans! lovely idea! if you havent decided who picks him up i have an idea but im not sure if youll like it. but here it goes, you no how some people like GaaNaru, well Gaara could be one of the people who picks naruto up, just to just the uchiha some copitition. but what ever you do im sure itll be good! and yes i cant spell for my like so there is bound to be spelling mistakes sorry...

*squeels* OMG I love your story! the way you set it up was so cute!. I would as for you to update soon to find out who Naru-chan bumped into but you haven't updated in a long time so I guess it would be a lost cause *Cries in corner*

I like this story a lot. please update when you can

ok... ideas... well first tell us who that person is then get on with sasunaru and kakairuk. but let it be more exciting!

MORE! u HAVE 2 write MORE! it's AWSOME!

aw poor naru-chan, he is always getting picked on. but i guess that is why we all love him to death because he is the best to annoy. i love yuor story and i cant wait to read more so please update soon!

tHIS IS AWESOME! pLEASE UPDATE SOON!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to se what next.