yay for sequel :D u need to put how toph and sokka get together in that one and also teh children like suho and haru's and katara's boy/girl :D although this isn't a toko fanfic i still like like it, if i did have to chose a next fave shipping for zuko other than toko i would probably puck this one and same goes for toph, I'd pick tokka

;p; i love this preview XD it's hilarious :D i can't wait to read it

Omg I LOVE IT^^ Really awesome job. I love all the Maiko scenes. really awesome job!

Ahh I LOVE this chapter. I love all the maiko scenes the most^^ Poor Aang, he's traveling to forget KATARA ans help people =D Anyway awesome job, i will reread this story as much as I can. So awesome job!

"Unless you considered Azula, but she was crazy and therefore didn’t count." - Laughed for 30 seconds straight. I love the plot,but does your writing skills meet the required skills for even writing a story. I'm sorry,but I have to say no. Your spelling,grammar is awfully horrible. Great plot,great problems - nice rising action & a great smooth line of falling action. But the grammar is almost devastating. I'd like you to re-edit your work,and modify spelling and grammar. If your not sure what is wrong in the grammar and spelling,ill revise it for you.

- keishakatara of

I've read all chapter's and loved all of them exellent job please make a sequel please please make a sequel

NO! WHY SUKI? WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE? So sad... I feel so sorry for Sokka. :'(

I loved every single chapter.
Your story made me cry, laugh, and smile
Awesome story!
Keep writing more!

There's no such thing as a perfect fanfic, but I have to say, this one comes closet than any I've read.

Tis' a sad thing, Suki and Iroh's death, but I can deal with main characters dying. But the love is a little overboard for me!

Looking forward to reading your other fanfics!

Signing off,
grammaguy

i love it :)

Once again, awesoem story!

Dear God, don't blame the pairing choices for the unpopularity of this story.

The problem with this story is the lack of description. THERE IS NO ART WHATSOEVER. There's no connection with the characters -- they don't seem believable, and the way the story is told is bare. It's little more than a script... And, given the right factors, a script would be more bracing.

Stop. Just stop.

This was very well written, I'd definitely enjoy a sequel.

I'm sorry. When I first read the trailer, I thought the story would be better. I understand wanting a story to be about after the end of the 2nd season, but the show is called Avatar The Last Airbender. It is about Aang. I just feel there wasn't enough of the other members of the GAang. I'm sorry.

Very nice story, one of the best I've read about the avatar. Will there be a sequel? other wise good job and keep it up.
Sincerely, avatar fan, Daniel