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| The Girl Obsessed With Yaoi 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseIt confused me... a little bit, but other then that, I liked it. |
| Lewnuhhkau 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was absolutely heartbreaking ;-; I really liked it though. |
| shadow-spawn180 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Soren:=(. That makes me sad. |
| Syeroix 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseIt confused me. But I think I sorted it out at the end.The scenes dont seem to connect to each other somehow. But I like the story.. just confuddled me. |
| LittleLinor 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuse... interesting way of doing things, though it's kinda confusing... Interesting choice of AU too, I like it. The homework part had me confused>< is it Soren POV? |
| Wishper 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuse;_; ...That's so sad... - ..I wish I weren't so thick... It took me a while to figure the story out.. The wording seems a bit unconventional; I like that... Also... You do present tense well... That's something that can't be said for most. - I looked through your profile... I feel that I'm rushing this review, simply in anticipation to read your other fics... Perhaps I'll give a few of them more full reviews. -Wish |
| FlamingDoritos 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Sad, but...I love it! Great job! |
| weighed and measured 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abusehnn~ this is really an interesting take on them, I like the chronological take on it, though I have to admit, mentally I'm screaming at Ike "RUN AFTER HIM, FOOL ;_;" *laughs* |
| RandomTopic 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseNaturally, like any other lazy teenager, I didn't bother with the AN and skipped straight to the fic. I read it, got to the last part and thought, "Is this going backwards in time?" I checked the AN; and indeed it was. Other than that... I don't really know what to say about this fic. It's good though. Unusual, but good. |
| Kyone 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThe order of the little snippets is really nice. For some reason, I couldn't imagine it going in any other order (somehow, that would ruin the whole thing). I also like how you write in sentence fragments some of the time here. It's just fitting. |