mwahahahhahhahahahhahahahahahahaha! that was wonderful! get hiashi arrested! only too funny!

please continue with the story

who is going to be naru mate kayla? oh and plz make garra naru and kayla a team plz.
good storycontinue.
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lol go Kyo, wonderful setup

Naruto started channeling some of the Kyuubi's chakra, “because I'm the one that he was sealed into, and I've been beaten for it almost every day of my life.”-huh, never figured Naruto for a drama queen

This is great story you have here.

I think Fem Haku would be a great idea to have with Gaara hehe Hyoton Sabaku or Ice Sand would be great duo hehe not to mention water is a natural enemy of Sand so putting those two together will solve both their issues.

Gaara is a Fūton/Doton/Raiton*given he can rather easily use it* Incidentally Wind and Earth make Sand lol.

Haku is Fūton/Suiton/Hyoton which mixed creates her Hyoton but it is mixed naturally with her Bloodline. But she can at least use Suiton which also allows her to be a good medic as most medics *not all* are Suiton affiliated.

But anyways lol I look forward to reading more and seeing where it all leads.

The only thing i'm wondering about is who you have naruto paired with?

A female Haku for Gaara that would be better Because they were Both Know what the other went threw so there would be more of an understanding between them. Hum Well they return to Their old village?

great story =) cant wait for the update lol i vote for gaara to be with with either fem/haku or hinata =)

Hey!
I gotta say I like this story and the idea behind it - how about you update it? :D
I'd be delighted^^

Good story so far but I think you're moving a bit too fast. You had some mistakes, mainly with your grammar. Also how can the Kyuubi know about the Akatsuki and Orochimaru if he's been sealed the whole time? Another thing when you're writing the names of a person or place you always capitalize them no matter where they are in a sentence. For example you mostly capitalized the names of people if they were in the beginning of the sentence but if they were placed any where else you wouldn't. The same applies for groups like the Akatsuki and places like Konoha. I also felt that the Kyuubi's encounter with Naruto was a bit too calm. I mean this is the most powerful tailed demon we're talking about he/she/it wouldn't be so calm when Naruto showed up in front of him and treat it like an everyday occurrence.

Looking good so far. ^_^ Please, update soon.

And, I vote for Gaara/Hinata for this fic.

Also, what about Kyo? What will happen with her?

I cant wait for the next chap the story realy sounds intresting to say atleast... :D naruto, gaara, kayla ( who turned out to be itachi's beloved 5 years younger cousin) plus there guardians anko and itchi who is also intresting coz' you made him seem so inocent and pure coz' his memories WERE sealed... to me it sounds realy truly like a god start ecpecialy now that the three have stárted to train together!! (and ofcourse naruto will train in his mind with kyuubi but will he share the info from there??) in addicion the name: the desert fox; it sounds realy good like somethinng to not forget so please update the story I'm so nervous about how you'll continue it sounds GOOD!!

cool. this looks like fun, as for gaara hainng a pairing, i'd make another OC. doesn;t have to be your OC, but i'm pretty sure there is a person suitable from the filler episodes of Naruto that exists in Suna. If you don't plan on using that, then no vote for me i guess as not sure who i could partner gaara up with, i could see this story as being a no pairings fic if you really wanted to.

UPDATE SOON