every word of this linked together, and as an insight into the Jokers feelings... I thought it was absolutely fantastic! I purely loved it, every part!

aww. love it!
brilliance! :D

Perfection. I think this is everything the Joker feels for Harley... except for the part about not killing her. I think, warpedly, that he'd think that it'd be better for her if he killed her, that that would show how much he loved her. God... I've confused myself now. But this was all very well written.

Finally a believeable take on the Joker's thoughts for Harley. I am so tired of reading endless romantic drivel where Joker is thoughtful and kind towards Harley. That is so out-of-character it might as well not even be about Joker and Harley. So rare to find good fanfic about those two, but this is wonderful, and realistic. It's chilling and disturbing just like a look into the Joker's mind should be. I loathe it when he's written as an almost-sane wisecracking (if that) romantic with no real hint of lunacy. Thanks for breaking that pattern and for being so bold as to be so original.

It's funny thinking that Mr.J would write a poem.
There were probs with grammer and word usage, but as always, the content of your work was impeccable. Great job.

it's so hard to tell what he's thinking, even when you're staring into his mind.

very good. odd, definately warped, like the joker, but it's got something to it that draws me in. I'm not a big poetry-fan, but I like this. good job. :-)

^_^ Very good!

Interesting. You seem to have a real grasp on the compelling aspect of Joker and Harley's relationship, all the twisted love/hate, desire/pain. I liked this exploration of where Joker's coming from in his feelings for Harley - haven't ever seen anybody take that on before, and this was quite evocative -takes you right in there to his turned around way of thinking.

Excellent. Exactly what fan fiction should be: fresh perspective on familiar territory. If some find that disturbing, if it messes with their pat ideas, so much the better.
5 stars in 5.

And no I don't sign reviews because I don't want whining writers e-mailing me to explain themselves. Let your work speak for itself. If it can't, you're wasting your time and mine.

It's. Er. Weird. Having never thought of Harley Quinn in that way before, I can honestly say that that, was weird. Good interpretation, though. You have a talent, but sometimes I think the lines break off too abruptly. This, however, is freeform, and you can bet your life that there are no rules in poetry. Good job overall.