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| ahhelga 2007-12-15 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I think this is so well written, so well characterized, so perfect. This is so true to what would happen; and it might as well happen, since it was just that in tune with the story. So many events would have gone amiss, and maybe more would have taken their places, which leaves me questioning what *would* happen? This was brilliant. I loved it, and I wish there was a continuation, but I doubt it. that's me ahhelga aka Pauline |
| pedal 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseOh god. The very idea makes me want to cry. This is so in character and could have happened so easily. Great writing, you've really captured the feeling of the book. There are very VERY few people who can capture the Finny's faraway denial of the way when he's sad. And probably less than can capture him altogether. Great job. I'll shut up now. ^^; |
| Elsiah 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. I really enjoyed Gene's musings while walking toward the gym; that was very true to form. He is obviously so torn the second he realizes that he has no choice but to tell Finny what he has done. Finny and Gene's interactions and Finny's reaction to the news are all very well written. Good job! |
| EternallyImperfect 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseNeat story. You conveyed the emotions nicely. |