I was going to come and go without signing in but- you made a reference to flashing jewellery- someone other than me notices- I'm not a Mark Kat fan as you know but great fic anyway

Oi, you've made me like Mark/Kat again. :P And Heather. ^_^ Yay Heatherparts. ^_^ Nasty, and IC for her. Go Heather.

The information about the amulet sounds most fascinating. I expect it'll make it into the RP? Some nice ideas and possibilities there, especially the wrong temperature.

There were a couple of grammar things I saw, a couple of missed commas and "doesn’t work otherwise ‘She pauses". You probably don't want detailed crit, so that's fine. :P 'S pretty good.

Lovely humancentric fic, making pretty good use of the game and associations. I really like that you've written Mark as being so emotionally affected by all the things trying to kill him he's faced over the years; canon didn't make him angst and angst, but I like slightlyscarred!Mark.

Another good one!