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Wotcher-Tonks
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abusewonderful...just breathtaking how you have captured these characters. I have accepted this story as canon in my world. :D.
little miss michelle
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseI really like this fic alot!! I hope you write more
Cursive Obsession
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abuseExcellent job, very well written. Captured the characters perfectly =)
Musica Diabolos
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseLoved it so much! Write more!
eat.tha.corn.NOW
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseWOAH! awesome story! you so have to write a sequel!
fireblazie
2007-08-18
ch 1,
abuseHere's another Lupin-Being-A-Noble-Prat fic but for some reason I didn't feel like throwing a frying pan at him, lol. It was *wonderfully* written, and I could just IMAGINE Tonks kissing him before the dementors got to him. That was a nice touch. :D And... what else to say? I really, really enjoyed reading it.
lyin'
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abusesaw the title, had to read it- love lady of shalott. and it's perfect.

so i haven't read enough to give the statement the weight it deserves, but this is simply the best lupin/tonks story i've read. or admittedly, could dream up.

her kissing him before the dementor could- FABULOUS. madam rosmerta's warning, etc., and snape was a fun addition- but their conversation was wonderful and a fabulous, absolutely believable set-up to book 6.

oh, lupin and tonks- and poor teddy... :(
Ekuboryu
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuseYour dialoge amuses me so much. I really like the way you write them both. We have seen so little of Lupin in recent books its nice to see him TALKING. Your Snape was inspired and the gossipy innkeeper was perfect.

On a scale of 3 to hedgehog I rate this story: strawberry pie
ChloeBowie
2007-07-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked it! I'm a pretty big Tonks/Lupin shipper, and it's nice to find a story that isn't completely blatantly sexual about them. It's also quite well written. It would be interesting to continue this with a little more of a plot, though. 8.5/10
MoonStoneFairy89
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseAh! Like many other fans, I can't wait until the final book is out. Instead, I decided to read a little fan fiction to help me cope with the remaining hours and found yours to be really great. Love the Tonks/Lupin pairing and I like how you took it to a different angle than most. Their actions, esp. Lupins, is in character and very believable. Probably one of my favorite "version" of how their relationship developed. Anyway, just thought I'd comment on your wonderful fic.
Saraqueenofallthings
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseThis story was incredibly gratifying. I've been looking for a decent Lupin Tonks story and yours is wonderful!
we-r-the-cure
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is such a great fanfic! It's AmAzInG!! I award you a million stars out of ten!! Great job!!
Haladflire65
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. Keep at it!
metawolfagus
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abusebeautiful and cute. i love how stubborn both of them are and how ridiculously unromantic and jaded snape is. maybe its because no one wants to go out with poor old snivellus... anyways, good job! 20 bazillion stars and a full moon for you.
liz
2007-07-18
ch 1, anon.
abusethis was a beautifully written piece and you really went into the complexity of a relationship with a werewolf - further than the reasons rowling gives in book 6. i loved it.

but that aside - i think what sets your characters apart is not just how well you write tonks and remus, but how spectacularly you wrote snape. most people just make him a git like malfoy, but you really got into his subtle sneering and quietly snide comments.

“Hence Nymphadora’s tender ministrations,” Snape observed scornfully.

"Nymphadora's...attentions"

beautiful. my hats off to you.
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