| Reviews for Hot City Cocktails |
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Sumshineg9 5/17/13 . chapter 5 I really like this story! I Did Not get confused... Well i do read At a 12th grade level and i am in sixth, so i don't think that Mean much. |
tilliquoi 10/28/12 . chapter 5True, the way that this is written is a little different and a bit confusing at first, but I managed to catch on fast and jump back and forth through the scenes in my head without having to re-read anything. Though, I'm sure I'll re-read at some point or another, anyway. I always do when I find stories that I really liked. I really enjoyed this. It was unique and fun, and it had me laughing quite a bit. Thanks for writing! |
BellaRose 10/15/09 . chapter 5 Naw, that's so cute. Really adorable. |
RabulaTasa 10/14/09 . chapter 5Well! This is a pleasant surprise, to say the least. I think my favorite feature of this fic is the tie-ins (Is that the right word? I don't think it is, but more appropriate alternatives aren't exactly leaping to mind.) between all of the chapters. It's a fairly straightforward story that, because you're bouncing the same scenes around from varying viewpoints, gains a whole new layer of complexity and... stuff. Yes, *stuff*. I hope you're doing well. -John |
Juleskat101 9/13/08 . chapter 1lol |
reader 12/2/07 . chapter 5 good story. the doesnt seem like a ending though is there more |
Angel-4rom-Heaven 9/30/07 . chapter 5Aw man! I cant believe I missed the last chapter; im so late. This was a great story I think you should continue it, with what happens to Raven and Beast Boy and whatnot. Cant wait to see more stories, Angel-4rom-Heaven |
Kettie 7/31/07 . chapter 5That was a very interesting story! I really enjoyed reading it :D although it was a bit confusing trying to keep track of the dates xD (I have such a bad memory.. hehe..) the storyline flowed pretty well! A little choppy in some places but you got the overall idea :) Looking forward to seeing more from you! |
ice illuser 7/29/07 . chapter 5these were fun! |
realfanficts 7/26/07 . chapter 5Well, for a story with a very simple plot, this is very good. |
realfanficts 7/25/07 . chapter 3It's fascinating how each chapter covers the same events, but from a different point of view every time. |
realfanficts 7/25/07 . chapter 2well, except for her formal manner of speech in the cartoon, I think you got Starfire's character all right. |
realfanficts 7/25/07 . chapter 1I'll be reviewing each chapter. Now, let's see...this is certainly an interesting idea, a very original piece of fanfiction, if you'll pardon my oxymoron. |
Toran of Raysed 7/24/07 . chapter 5Splendid! A great ending to a fantastic little series. Great way to finish itoff, giving it some finality, but enough closure so it's like "THE END" Even though it is. I makes it seem as if you could go on,but we all know you won't just...great job, and...YEAH! -ToR |
6StringSamurai13 7/24/07 . chapter 5Ahh, excellent chapter and conclusion to a great AU fic. I've never been a huge fan of AU fics, but this was good. You managed to really keep the essence of the original characters alive. I really was looking forward to Raven's chapter and I loved how it ended. Although...I can't help but want to see more and see where they go from Raven giving Gar her number. Anyway, keep up the good work! |