Have you finished Cell yet?

Nicely written :)

Short and seems a bit spur-of-the-moment, since it seems short and tells me nothing I don't already know.

But good

I just got done reading Cell, and I loved your story. You really captured Alice's inner struggle. It would be great to hear more from her!

PS How creepy was the tiny Nike!

very good fic. I simply HATED how Alice died. She survived the pulse, an explotion, but no, she died because someone threw a cinderblock at her face ;-;

keep writting!

Yay! Good job! I love Cell!

Very good. I have read Cell numerouse times (even though im 13). Hope you enjoy it. Im writing a Cell fic, please feel free to check it out.

WilltheGreat

The way you described how Alice felt is amazing, almost like SK himself wrote it. Alice Maxwell was such an interesting character and the way she is lost is well lame to say the least. I loved 'Cell' but the ending is also disappointing. I'm hoping that SK was just leaving room for a 'Cell 2'.