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his-little-troll
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
Poor Rin. I think it was a teensy bit over done, but still, cute. :)

I would hate to be his daughter. Lol
darksoulwolf
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
I see nothing wrong with Kakashi is doing

>/.\>

Rin is happy and no boys are going after her...all is write with the world
Soothsayer-666
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
Heehee, I can see that Kakashi would do this! :D
AmQaudrus
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Blody hilarious x)
great story! ♥
kittydemon18
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
very clever of kakashi to distract his daughter in such a way, course that won't work on normal not valentines days but still, very clever
great story overall, the bit about the pie suggesting lady was my favorite
darkchocol8807
2008-11-12 . chapter 1
Brilliant!
But rin does seem to be rather forgetful little girl now, is she?

DarkC
Gx3
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
ROFL
Brilliance!
So funny :D
So like Kakashi xD
Very well done ;)
AngelBornOfHell
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
kakashi is good. he is the over-protective father without making it obvious to rin tht he is being overprotective. i mean, rin's not stupid, but it's crazy how he can pull it off for 3 years and STILL not get caught. no wonder he's a genius
lizzpercush
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
very humorous. poor rin, she's enjoying herself and it's great father daughter bonding. aww...i approve!
Vampyric Ninja
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Haha! Cute. Kakashi's rather overprotective, eh? xDD
KnightandPrincessLover
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm pretty sure that is possibly the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Thanks for this great laugh. I could imagine him being so overprotective. ha This is great.
RandumlyxTwisted
2007-11-18 . chapter 1
YOU SOO GOTTA MAKE A SEQUEL or something i totally luved this! OMG who wouldn't? LOL i honestly did like it!! well hopefully you'll make a sequel or seomthing..
Asami-chann
2007-11-05 . chapter 1
aww...

Kakashi is very over protective.

But he'd be a cool dad!

Asami
Zetnnik
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! I love a sneaky Kakashi!
Kakashi The Most Awesome
2007-10-19 . chapter 1
that was great! i like protective daddy kakashi!! es lovely
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