Yay! The sequel is up! Hmm, wasn't Dobby stopping the letters? Why didn't he give any back to them? Well, I've loved your other stories, and of course the prequel to this so I'm really excited. Will there be any future pairing foreshadowing; am I correct in thinking Harry/Ginny Ron/Hermione if the series continues? Anyhow, I love it! Great way for Natalie to find out!

interesting start, but what about Harry's and Hermione's mail that Dobby was stopping? if he was.

maybe he could return later that night and say, "Oh I forgot" and leave the letters for them if there are any

hhmm, hermione shouldn't be jealous, harry never had another sister. their parents on the otherhand, that would be explainable. they kinda have a reason really-any child that's adopted has a special place in their heart for their biological parents, and harry would especially, considering he knows they died to save him. plus, he wasn't adopted as a baby, so he probably had more of a longing for his real parents...but i like how u try to weave together how harry feels about the potters and the course i'll always favor the potters... everytime u stress the biological in front of parents i feel a pain in my heart! well, slight exageration, but almost

Excellent

please update again soon

Nice chapter. I like how the scene with Dobby went. Having him appear while Natalie was with Harry and Hermoine was a nice twist as well as having Natalie be the one to tell him that he can't punish himself in their house. Dobby's characterization, obviously based on what Malfoy said, was good especially in contrast to how adoring he had been of Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great to see you back in the saddle again. Thanks for updating the other story, it gave me a kick to check your authors profile!

The Mail?

Good work with PS, hope CoS is just as good. Keep it up!

I would love to see what you write next.

Thank you,

Terri

Yay! The second story! Woohoo, and it's a great start too! Please, continue!

okay, that was a neat way for Natalie to discover her magical potential. I was almost hoping Dobby would do a slight repeat of the books and make the cake float, and the Grangers would have to explain everything.

I'm not very good at leaving reveiws, so I'll just say this. I've enjoyed the fics you've written so far. CoS is also my favorite HP book, so please be very careful with it!

very good! hope you update soon!

uh oh harrys in trouble hehe good start to a good second year :)