Wow, that was really good. I never questioned the fact that Rinoa became a sorceress, but I loved how you incorporated some of the stuff from the game into your fanfiction, nice work.

This was beautiful, haunting, and an creative look into the mechanics of magic in the game. It's so fitting how sorceress magic wields its sorceress and not the other way round; it's creepy and just so apt. I loved your take on Rinoa because it's just like her to keep trying and wanting to be useful.

This was really good. It was nice to see a story that had a different perspective about Rinoa becoming a Sorceress. I loved it

. . .really insightful! I absolutely loved it. The bluntness of of it was a good slap in the face for me, and I LOVED it! I wish stroies like these got the attention they deserved, really good job!

-Dead Pollen