Wow, I really liked this. you're a good writer. Nice job.

Yet again really good story- and Jack's Mannequin is one of the best bands ever.
Meg

Very well written. It says quite a lot, for not really talking about anything.
--Alex

You = Great writer
Me = Should just screw the attempts or writing

Aww...this was sad but written very well. Nice work here.

*Vanity Is Precious*

Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.

God has blessed you with an incredible gift. :)

Keep it up!

EdwardDazzlesMe

its so sad and beutiful. i loved it

Gorgeous.

Feels like Bella's NM mind, even though it's in 3rd person. Not sure whether the slightly off balance repetition (down to phrases - 'right about now' - in the middle) is deliberate, but I think it works really well in this context. It sounds exhausted, on edge, struggling to cope enough to pass as sane. Lovely.

Not sure about 'reality check' at the end - surely at this point Bella's already firmly under the impression that she's generally unappealing? Perhaps I'm missing something, lol.

Great fic, anyhow.

I absolutely love the last three lines.

Fantastic. =)

Love it!

I'd say you don't. But we're equal. Im a music fiend. And only for good stuff.

Skillet, Jack's Mannequin, Three Days Grace, Paramore..etc
Good story anyway.

It's your first ever one-shot? Wow, it was so good! Your stories always has that... real feeling about them, and so does this one. You really get under the character's skin. Great one!

Aww, getting into the depth of her pain again...this was good, although you switched bewteen present and past tense halfway through.

I really hate fluorescent lights, they suck. :( But your story was really good. :)

wow. i never knew anyone could hate fluorescent lights that much. lol. im going to check them out next time in a public bathroom and see if they have the same effect on me as they do for bella. Edward being gone and reading her thoughts are so depressing! lol. but this was an awesome one shot :]